Who told the prisoners that they could run with their chains and be free? Who told the puppets that they could move without the puppeteer? Who told the heart that it couldn't feel love? Who told..........
I saw her like you see a butterfly
carrying on her wings the scent
of promises born where the wind
is born, and you think to say,
something,
and suddenly you have no voice;
what could you say to that creature
that filled your eyes with a wonder
you never has seen before?
And now…
a empty heart like a withered
flower which everybody can see
on the hay chest of the scarecrow,
with arms extended like he’s asking
why you?
why now?
When the abandoned fields are barren,
why come suddenly here
when of tears is a drought…
but then I couldn’t say anything,
because she heard it
many times before,
all those promises in a garden
of paper roses
but with real thorns.
After saying a sunny day “I do”
believing with all her heart,
that so little words one day
could,
became the strongest link
on a prisoner’s chain
which dreams to be free…
That butterfly will be no more,
as she’s firmly chained
to a promise
that’s getting heavier
as we get old…
If goodbyes can be sealed
with only a tender kiss…
will another tender kiss seal
a distant love?
so well written-with depth of feeling and expression
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on April 14, 2009
Georg..words written from one whom understands. Thus your name, Wounded Eagle.
This is tremendously full of heart and soul! It is never to late..or is it?
You write with beauty and feeling.
Love and sunshine, CarolHawks
Sometimes the heart aches all on its own and the body must follow, hence a prisoner of love. What a beautiful story, so warm and tender expressing all the relative emotions that one can fathom....
Georg, Karena Medicine Woman, feels Wounded Eagle's sadness. I send you warm hugs and positive energy to tame a broken heart.
Your poem is done so eloquently and softly speaks of tender feelings and unrequited love.
Beautiful Georg, simply beautiful!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
The winds of time blowing through your rafters and cornstalks my friend, the wind of melancholy, of love lost, A sweet wind you leave us, with your words, but to no avail, only questions remain.
Another Rhum Morgan to warm the spirits, back to reality, and prosit!
Hugs! Juergen
Book 2 of the romance trilogy Horses of Tir Na Nog
Life for CJ, and Shawn, has taken on new meaning and a wonderful turn. Never in a million years did CJ think she could be this happy. With her new husband and closest friends in tow, she’s bound
Blessings and Love - Micke
Cryssa
of paper roses
but with real thorns
Another powerfully sad piece, brother.
This is tremendously full of heart and soul! It is never to late..or is it?
You write with beauty and feeling.
Love and sunshine, CarolHawks
Fee
Be always safe,
Karen
You are a true romantic!
This is very beautiful and very deep
I love it!!
Sending you Peace Love and Light...Yolie
Love,
ET
Regis
In Spirit,
Bear
(((HUGS))) and much love from America, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Rebecca
Newfie Hugs, Rose
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Your poem is done so eloquently and softly speaks of tender feelings and unrequited love.
Beautiful Georg, simply beautiful!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Another Rhum Morgan to warm the spirits, back to reality, and prosit!
Hugs! Juergen
Great write here Georg, and I like the style you used.
Cynthia