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One Dream Made of Water
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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Don't tell her that I was here...

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I am in my tiredness a little broken,
with hopes of finding you...all worn.
Love that time kept under dust,
and longing of caresses so dead now.

I am here, still waiting
with the illusion that keeps all,
the first of the smiling dreams
and that first, that happy love.

I am, trying to convince myself that,
if life becomes a desert, almost,
I will wait...
with my little dream made of water,
to calm your thirst when you arrive…
for ever more.




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 Reviews of "One Dream Made of Water"
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
Reviewed on April 21, 2009
WOW! such a soothing sad yearning poem
It reached out and grabbed hold of my heart!
YOU wrote it so well Georg!
The illusion is ONLY in your mind, as LOVE AWAITS!

WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings of LOVE, Light, and Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on April 18, 2009
Wow this poem took my breath away so sad!!
Georg your words touch the soul of the reader (me )
True love waits!!
Peace Love and Light....and Hugsss...Yolie
Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on April 17, 2009
Truly nice work Georg, the emotion you express within this poem could touch the very heart of the soul and make for tears and joy combined...this kind of love is as eluding as it is satisfying...

great work my friend...

Art Sun...
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
such yearning in this sad,but hopeful poem,
only true love has such patience... sis tl
Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
Filled with such longing.
Heartfelt I enjoyed "One Dream Made of Water"
Love the way you wrote this Georg

~Gwendolyn

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
Waiting in your patience...to calm her thirst. You romantic and lovely man. She will be the luckiest woman!
Love and sunshine, CarolHawks
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
Sometimes all the anticipation can only enhance the wings of love to endure the test of time...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
why, judging from your picture would she need more water Georg, you gave her plenty as I can see, didn't you? you'd give her another drink, would she want it I ask? or am I reading this wrong? I mean, it could well be a most romantic allusion to giving her life again, is it? Just asking, Bless you Pal! Juergen.
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
dreams replenish the heart's thirst and keep the soul alive ...

romantically moving with a taste melancholy to it ...
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
Hi WE, "I am, trying to convince myself that,
if life becomes a desert, almost,
I will wait...
with my little dream made of water,
to calm your thirst when you arrive…
for ever more."

Maybe we all are fooling ourselves, eh? Remember though, man has never been able to create water, and it is the most powerful, healing creation! All respects to you, my friend...

In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
You are such a romantic at heart... beautifully written!
Cryssa
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
The whole poem is beautiful but that last line is one of the most tender and romantic I've ever read Georg.
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
Haunting, romantic and a bit sad...but so very beautiful.
Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
Beautiful yearning and that sentence "With my dream made of water, to calm your thirst when you arrive for ever more." I have not seen anything to match it or convey a love so masterfully.
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
What peaceful Dreaming, water induces such calmness. rippling with emotions...
Yes, very nice.
Ty Georg
Ch'erie
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
Don't ever let your dreams dry up.....beauiful Georg!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
Dreams are truly made of many things, including water and tears. May you have a waterfall of happy ones.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
GORGEOUS, Georg, you slake many throats of thirst with these lines - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
yes, beautiful write
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
Beautiful writing sweet man...love the picture as always...have a wonderful and safe day..Hugssss
Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
Like Liana said...so very sad but so very romantic and beautiful!!!
"if life becomes a desert...I will wait..." love these lines.
Great write and photo too!

Cynthia
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
I do declare that the directness, openess annd pure outpouring of heart in this one makes it your best work ever. It awakes the mind and haunts the heart in just the right stroke of beauty and sadness. Well done my friend.

Fee

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
Very good write, Georg; well done, (((my friend)))! Bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :)
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
Beautiful,very beautiful, very romantic, and very sad!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE EVERY WORD HERE!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
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