You open your eyes and you aren't sure...was it all a dream, was the flowers of the garden the ones caressing your body and leaving their deep scents on your skin?
But your body are telling otherwise, it aches after going through the passion's twisting and grinding when conquering an all love craving octopus.
When the frogs in the pond became silent
the crickets too stopped their insane songs,
and the cool breeze was holding its breath
when the garden heard the softly of moans
from a woman that was intimately touched
with a gossamer caress that tinged her soul.
Sweat moisture on your trembling upper lip
as expecting another kiss, a promising more,
my hand was gentle grabbing flesh on the hip
as exited nipples like hungry eagle’s talons
wanted with feverish lust to rip open my chest
with glazed eyes in deep skies you were lost.
The grass was a luxurious green emerald bed
and had a canopy from the old oak on loan so
the curious moon couldn’t spy us from above
as I cover your naked body, like Eros I was
entering like a thirsty man in a water well
into the deepest and warmest of your love.
The sharp smell of dawn pulled my eyelids open
violet hues over the horizon, no one yet moves,
stretching, a gust of wind gave me a shudder as
my extended and empty arm told me I was alone,
but I had the scent of your body all around me
an erotic, feminine perfume clinging on my bones,
you had me inside, until your scream of pleasure
scared the night away and the moon was gone.
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Reviews of "Love in the garden's shadows (part two)"
Waking up before the end of the dream, I hate that when that happens
You have to stop eating that junk food before bed, or eat more you decide
Great write, have a good day
The Buzzard
Awesome you blow me away with your beautiful
golden words
So romantic and an
incredibly beautiful fireworks display of passion
Georg…I am so happy to be able to visit and read
at list for today and maybe tomorrow YEAH!!!
Wishing you a safe and Happy 4TH
Peace Love and Light..and Hugssss Yolie
OMG!!! Wait until pee wee hears about this, an tells Ma! jersey devil was so excited he swallowed his marijuana instead of smoking it. I won't tell you what I did, bro Edvard, oh I learn so much from you,and this incredible poem you wrote about it,so beautiful and
better than any fireworks! I won't tell ma!
"entering like a thirsty man in a water well"
now that phrase clearly titillates this aging hippies libido.
How magnificent your poetic mind has created this.
Methinks thee is not as old as thou thinketh Edvard the Erect. (-:
Blessings ...
Happy July Fourth to you over there in Sweden; may it be full of fun, family, food, festivities, and above all else, FIREWORKS!! ANd thank YOU for serving in Vietnam; WELCOME HOME, SOLDIER!! *SALUTE*
(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers~
As always, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Eqully as captivating and heart wrenching as part one, draws the reader in to the very end hoping for a divine intervention by Cupid or one of the Gods of love to entice the continuation of this oh so tantalizing love.
Essence of romantic lover; your heart of passions kisses these pages with emotional beauty Georg, it is so lovely to read something like this from the heart of a man, reading, seeing & feeling & experiencing the love spoken within this truly exquisite love poem…So Very Beautiful! Thank You!
Love & Inspirations
Vickie
Georg, such an erotic romantic writing. An inspiration to all that miss the warmth of human touch. Makes me want to find a lover and go to the forest under this full moon that is coming up. It must be the full moon, there is romance in the air!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
This is a sentimental and epic story about a young man, injured in the Viewnam War, who returns to Dallas, Texas, in 1964, and begins rebuilding his life. Set against the rock and roll era of the early 1960’s, when casual sex and recreational drugs w
Audrey and Sue, both 42, took a trip to England completely paid for by Audrey's cheating millionaire boyfriend. “Cougar” describes older women on the prowl for much younger men, and although they didn't begin the trip on the prowl, somehow they bec
In Spirit,
Bear
You have to stop eating that junk food before bed, or eat more you decide
Great write, have a good day
The Buzzard
PS: Ma says you're riling up Jersey too much, and LOL at Tiger Lily!
Regis
Newfie Hugs, Rose
golden words
So romantic and an
incredibly beautiful fireworks display of passion
Georg…I am so happy to be able to visit and read
at list for today and maybe tomorrow YEAH!!!
Wishing you a safe and Happy 4TH
Peace Love and Light..and Hugssss Yolie
better than any fireworks! I won't tell ma!
Love,
sis tiger lily
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Welcome home, Marine, welcome home. Thank you for your service! SEMPER FI, HOO-AHHH!
now that phrase clearly titillates this aging hippies libido.
How magnificent your poetic mind has created this.
Methinks thee is not as old as thou thinketh Edvard the Erect. (-:
Blessings ...
Happy July Fourth to you over there in Sweden; may it be full of fun, family, food, festivities, and above all else, FIREWORKS!! ANd thank YOU for serving in Vietnam; WELCOME HOME, SOLDIER!! *SALUTE*
(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers~
As always, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
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Love & Inspirations
Vickie
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"