Winter's coming in more senses than one, snow falling on the ground and staying on the hair, eyes watering by lust or by age and yet...love will be the same inside the heart, even if never reciprocated, even if love never touched us with a gracious finger.
Love will be there and thus will make us a less defective end product of God.
Flames like Hawaiian dancer on the beach,
a burning log in the fireplace spits sparks
disturbing for a moment the soft dreams
of a nearly inaudible purring of a tired cat,
while a dog, quite shy of anything on fire,
only one eye half open will watch the night.
Rocking chair and a blanked on my knees,
wandering thoughts, remembering the life
that was consumed like that log in ashes
of an ever searching for love, lonely man,
too late now for start collecting any regrets,
it was my fault, didn’t see her passing by.
Dry Autumn leafs like forgotten old letters
telling that Winter’s coming, no doubts about,
feel in the bones that there will be less of them
to protest all the weather’s whims or its ice
which will cover the memory of what once was
but that our youth didn’t stopped, let it to pass.
My trembling hands holding a crystal goblet,
a sip of brandy and feel the fire going down,
a tear in my face caused perhaps of the smoke,
could remember her just with my closed eyes,
a forbidden juicy fruit from a Paradisiacal tree
that if I ever reach for could have been all mine.
I remember how I wished summer never ended
as my head was hold with tenderness on her lap,
silky fingers telling of me being so longed for,
that I understood it wasn’t a dream, it was love,
she was mine and I was hers, blending together,
two words meaning something, like good-bye.
I will carry her in my shadows trip to beyond,
to where hate or love not a meaning will have,
just both of us shattering a dream with reality
we will born again in other emptiness of God
where man can’t pollute the waters of our river
and where our tender kisses will forever last.
...AND EVERY ONE OF US...HAS ONE. THIS IS A CANDID LOOK AT ONE WHO, EVERY NOW AND THEN, REMEMBERS A PAST LOVER THAT CANNOT BE FORGOTTEN. DONE SO WELL...THE IMAGERY AND PHRASES...HAUNT. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS....JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
I sense such deep love for one you held close once and the memories replay over and over with warmth and adoration of something that could have been...
Flames like Hawaiian dancer on the beach,
a burning log in the fireplace spits sparks
disturbing for a moment the soft dreams
of a nearly inaudible purring of a tired cat,
while a dog, quite shy of anything on fire,
only one eye half open will watch the night
Georg. You set the stage and then followed with a parade of beautiful, masterful stanzas culminated with magic. Patrick
You make my heart pitter patter. The tone - mystery, melancholy and expectation - a remarkable poem! You continually amaze me. God has given you an incredible gift and I thank you for sharing it. Sometimes I feel like a 'peeping Tom' into your thoughts, but I'm so glad that you share your wonderful heart and soul. this is an ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh poem.
Georg, I am constantly blown away by your poetics. I love your mind's eye and the emotions you paint and kindle with your finely-wrought phrasings. The way you construct this poem is solid and earthy and yet speaks of the fragility of autumn leaves and tender, unrequited remembrances with such lightness of touch. I have been deeply impacted by your words, especially: "she was mine and I was hers, blending together, two words meaning something, like good-bye." Like Marcia, I love also the expressions in your introduction. Thank you for this. xx
my snifter now swirling blackberry brandy warming
throughout those wintry fires as each sip inside this poetic expression reaches within
“Old Lover Reminiscences”
Soothes the soul right through to the heart of love’s precious memories…
your words embracing them so sweetly,
where would we be with out them…
Peace, Love & inspirations
Vickie
Beautiful Loooooooooooonging Georg, may the day come to you in sweetness,shattering your dream with reality as you said, when you are born again, where only is Love! Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on November 17, 2009
"we will be born again in other emptiness of God
where man can’t pollute the waters of our river
and where our tender kisses will forever last."
Romance is definately alive in your heart and your dreams there old buddy and this one says soooo much for so many of us. Thank you for sharing ... enjoyed.
fee
Excellent, Georg! The words you choose pulled from within your heart resonate with me for lost love, although many years in the past, is still lost love when one can only surmise the outcome if be allowed to see the light of time and day.
Your friend; Mark
I agree with Liana, You have such a talent for writing. Sometimes all we have is what we keep inside of our hearts. Our memories carry us through many a lonely night.
Much peace, light and love,
Amber "V"
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!! HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!! MAY GOD BLESS YOU, GEORG MATEOS!!!!!!!!!!! YOU WILL BE ALWAYS MOST TALENTED POET TODAY AND FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Be always safe,
Karen
a burning log in the fireplace spits sparks
disturbing for a moment the soft dreams
of a nearly inaudible purring of a tired cat,
while a dog, quite shy of anything on fire,
only one eye half open will watch the night
Georg. You set the stage and then followed with a parade of beautiful, masterful stanzas culminated with magic. Patrick
God bless you. Kathy
Love will be there and thus will make us a less defective end product of God.
Love and Hugs,
Marcia
throughout those wintry fires as each sip inside this poetic expression reaches within
“Old Lover Reminiscences”
Soothes the soul right through to the heart of love’s precious memories…
your words embracing them so sweetly,
where would we be with out them…
Peace, Love & inspirations
Vickie
Christine
Love & Light,
Joseph
where man can’t pollute the waters of our river
and where our tender kisses will forever last."
These are wonderful lines. Beautiful poetry.
fee
Your friend; Mark
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Much peace, light and love,
Amber "V"