Pisces & Aquarius souls will understand, and those that saw water running down the mountain sides, and those that meditated by a pond, and the ones by the river, and all that without an umbrella let the rain to kiss their faces...
A mirage among the sands of a deserted mind
I heard you among cold waves calling me,
thirsty, I wished to repose my feverish head
on your bosom and feel you in my parched lips.
Thunder, the warning voice of the skies gods
announcing the arrival of many tears for me,
because they saw that I was going alone, under
a silent rain, forming pools beneath my feet.
I was thrown one night from life’s secure raft
into a maelstrom of very hard and cruel dreams,
and just when I was drowning and letting go…
with a big wave you came and gave me a kiss.
A ship’s wreak on a solitary faraway island
I had no one coming to touch my burning skin
but you, wrapping my body with your body,
a Siren made of living waters, that was thee.
Georg - Though I am a Scorpio, not Pisces or Aquarius, I appreciate the water images and the "... Siren made of living waters..." one of your best. - David
Georg I read this and I swear I felt you wrote it about me, I can as an Aquarian, a sailor, a romantic and a poet empathize on so many levels with it. Perfect write my friend.
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I love when that happens...when the influences of the constellations, their scintillations sorb our souls and seep. . .
This is one fine example, Georg~
Love and Peace~
...and Happy Thanksgiving!
Kimmy~
longing and fulfillment, as I read this waves washed over me, or were they tears, we go our own spiritual path, no matter the God's warnings and predictions, but the spiritual rewards are heaven like, and isn't she most beautiful, worth every tear, worth every paradise.
Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Georg, did you read my poem "That Time"? This poem almost sounds like a response, was I channeling something because you posted this right before I posted mine...this is really eerie...I love this poem, it is on the same wavelength that I am on...
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on November 24, 2009
Astounding poetry Georg. Again, another one of my favorites from you. Beautiful.
A wonderful dream
with impeccable imagery.
My luck though, I'd dive in
to caress that beautiful siren.
to taste of her sumptuous lips,
to fondle lovingly her ample bosom,
and to stroke her flowing hair,
and she'd turn out to be a
great white shark. (-:
Blessings ...
r
Georg...Your tender words are beautiful ensouling elements
So elevating to the spirit of love…this delicate caress
The call, the need, the wanting, the presence, the arrival
Truly Embracing
Peace, Love & Inspiration
Vickie
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fee
This is one fine example, Georg~
Love and Peace~
...and Happy Thanksgiving!
Kimmy~
Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
with impeccable imagery.
My luck though, I'd dive in
to caress that beautiful siren.
to taste of her sumptuous lips,
to fondle lovingly her ample bosom,
and to stroke her flowing hair,
and she'd turn out to be a
great white shark. (-:
Blessings ...
r
This crab loved this Muse's call - just beautiful, this write - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
So elevating to the spirit of love…this delicate caress
The call, the need, the wanting, the presence, the arrival
Truly Embracing
Peace, Love & Inspiration
Vickie
with a big wave you came and gave me a kiss.
You are a very lucky guy; I usually only get big wet kisses from my dogs!