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Melting Love… forever
by Georg E Mateos → (All Poetry by Georg E Mateos)
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Are we searching in the water a forgotten past? a forgotten life that thousands of generations before us had the pleasure to be part of?
As a man, I need to ask, is she still there...waiting?


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Drowning, and yet, no dying
in the Kingdom of Poseidon,
wrapped forever in wet promises
which weren’t made of tears
but in happiness grandiloquent
exuberance of the lovers
that can’t or will not feel the fears.

Like bubbles in the fading waves
a face full of ebullient smiles,
there’s not goodbyes going out
because back again will it appear
taken from pure and darkened eons
with the moon pulling high ties
that make the waters so unclear.

With emerald colored thoughts,
diamonds in your eyes blues and
a tender promise that’s sparkling
like a coming flashing ethereal spear,
wearing a mischievous smile
and aiming for my waiting lips,
a moment of deep love to share.

As I sink with thousand fathoms
calling me to Circes abyss home
I see you floating away in a carriage
made of a myriad of liquid pearls
with adrift strands of golden hair
that the reaching down jealous sun
are pulling you up for its Princess.

And then an inner storm took me
like a tsunami suddenly around you
my body was like a warm wave
that melted together with the fading girl,
a furious maelstrom, boiling waters,
you, me, and a vortex getting smaller
two lovers pressed into a single tear.





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 Reviews of "Melting Love… forever"
Reviewed on March 15, 2010
The whole poem is exceptional but that last line, oh I wish I had written it. One of your best Georg.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on March 13, 2010
Oooh the romantic is loose in you today Georg! Watch out for that tail though! Patrick

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on March 13, 2010
I love the manner in which you end this poem, at the tip of the vortex. Lovely and powerful. hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on March 12, 2010
How beautifully expressed with sentually flowing words. Well said, my friend...Very well said.
Mark

Reviewed on March 12, 2010
your words Georg are always impressive
you weave love & devotion
the prowess of eternal emotion
we all melt inside your visuals
and the closing visual is amazing...did I say amazing?
Oh Yes Amazing....
Warm Sand & Caressing Tides
Vickie

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 11, 2010
Such serene beauty and poignant chosen words weave this beauty leaving a lingering appetite for more....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Sheri Uy
Reviewed on March 11, 2010
With this melting love... gosh Georg, i am forever yours! Romantic, nostalgic, simply beautiful!

Lovelovelove,
Sheri

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 10, 2010
i loe the thoughts you opened up here!

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 10, 2010
Great delving, Georg, beneath the waves of consciousness into the deeper world of sustained emotion.

John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 10, 2010
Well old buddy you may be another year older but your romantism and love of sweet sensual poetry has only grown even sweeter if possible. well done old freind.
fee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 10, 2010
This poem of magnitude evokes within me thoughts of past lives and multiple universes. Thank you, Georg. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on March 10, 2010
Imprinted in our DNA and sub-conscious memories visions of history and heartache. This was a great poem my friend. Really enjoyed this!

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 10, 2010
Your waiting lips waiting for her waiting lips;
you have conjured a palpable scene Edvard. The last line
is the work of a wizard.
r

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 10, 2010
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! ONE OF YOUR BEST POEMS, GEORG MATEOS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on March 10, 2010
Absolutly beautiful Georg, I feel as though you gave us a gift through your words.
Love ya Georg.
Your Newfie Friend Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on March 10, 2010
INDULGING IN THE 'PAIN' AND 'WISDOM' OF...'FACING REALITY'. A MOST IMPRESSIVE WORK GEORG. YOU ARE...WONDERFULLY GIFTED AND I FEEL BLESSED TO PARTAKE OF THIS GIFT. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD KEEP AND BLESS YOU. LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on March 10, 2010

Georg your words have painted a vivid picture
On my mind i can almost see the warm waves
That melted together with the fading girl,
A furious maelstrom, boiling waters,
OMG this is absolutely beautiful the tenderness
Two lovers pressed into a tear
George you turn words into a masterpiece
Brilliant Piece!!
Wishing you Love Peace and Light…Yolie

Reviewed on March 10, 2010
Hi Georg,

Water has a memory...

In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed on March 10, 2010
this has blown me away dear George. Your gift to play with words is unimaginable

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 10, 2010
And then an inner storm took me,
like a tsunami suddenly around you,
my body was like a warm wave

WOW! You must have had quite a birthday, brother.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 10, 2010
A majestic masterpiece and a nice change from a mind that has not sunk beneath the sod yet or a love interest left on the beach of life from the waves of youth.

George


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