anyways (poem) by Josephine M Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

Jose,
I would have dropped the tail of course,as we have spoken before, yet tis youre work screw what others say!
Now to the meat of the matter lass, I must say you spoke my very heart! My mouth has gotten me into ALL the trouble I have ever been in my life! Yet.........It escorted me into grand halls of greatness as well.....I bow in retreat, I like the honesty in your work! A rare damn thing in the world of copy cat bull...., alas my passion overtakes me again, allowing wordy to fly! I retreat in bow and salute...
Rod

Reviewed by Netta Jack (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

I like your 'talking to my girlfriend' presentation. I think I will be here for a while. You are a very talented down to earth writer. KUDOS!!!

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on October 23, 2002

Josie you done it again with another superb poem, in all its honesty...take care and well done with this great write...Mark...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 23, 2002

Yep I've done it and been the victim of it too! Like this a lot, Josey.

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on October 23, 2002

What in the hell did you mean when you said......

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on October 23, 2002

Yes I often take offense where it does not exist. Then I feel guilty and very sorry. I know that when I run off at the mouth most of the time I am wrong and even when I am right I am wrong. There could have been a softer gentler way. Bill

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on October 22, 2002

Some people are thick-stinned, while others are too sensitive. Some are tactful, others are brutally honest. Just be yourself, and let the chips fall where they may. Very good.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on October 22, 2002

10-22-02

__Only Fool's Never Make Mistakes...

TRASK

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on October 22, 2002

hahaha yeah know what you mean.....enjoyed!!!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 22, 2002

raw!!!

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on October 22, 2002

Hey...I do that all the time... and it has cost me dearly at times... I'm working on it tho....
Jenni

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on October 22, 2002

Gees! I thought I was the only one that done that! Great write,,,Lisa

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on October 22, 2002

"but you started it" I say that under my breath. Great write Josie

Reviewed by Gumby Pokey (Reader)

Reviewed on October 22, 2002

when that happen i just turn into a little clay ball and roll away

Reviewed by Gumby Pokey (Reader)

Reviewed on October 22, 2002

Oh yes, just a few hours ago! lol Loved this write!

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on October 22, 2002

Boy, do I see what you mean--have to join the twins in saying "you're talkin' 'bout me"...
Too often, too loose, the mouth goes roamin' too free--
Making me wish I had no vocabulary...

Reviewed by Sandi Braveheart

Reviewed on October 22, 2002

Very good!

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on October 22, 2002

but I forgive you.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 22, 2002

you're talkin' bout me, too..i don't think before i open my mouth. and then i wonder why daddy would call me "bugle mouth" while growing up. (oh, how i would get MAD when he called me that!!) i AM a bugle mouth at times!! love, your friend with the bugle mouth, karen lynn. ((((HUGS))))) :)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on October 22, 2002

{{{jo}}} you talkin' 'bout me...i spout off before i can b-i-t-e-m-y-t-o-n-g-u-e!! this is one write i can relate to...if i've did or said anything to offend, please forgive...i'm just...stupid at times. (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :) (thanks for your commentary on my poems, dear!)