life spills (poem) by Josephine M Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

em.. yeah..next time.. that's when we all do our best and smartest stuff.. next time! This is cooooool.. YOU are coooool! (grin) katy.

Reviewed by Leysa Lowery

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

My husband just bought a used Harley and is refurbishing it. I can't wait for us to take the "spills" along with the wind! Great write!

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

I do this every day! Hug yourself in a hot girly smelly bubble bath...put a few tea lights in there....shut the lights off and think nothing at all...with a box of chocolate ;) lol...people ask "How do you do it all?" and my reply is "Try iy one time, you'll see..you have to." -- I totally understand this :) Teresa

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

ouch!!! mercurochrome time. Do that ALL the time. my knees look like they belong on a 4 year old

Reviewed by Mom

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

Pray you didn't get hurt. Good way to express yourself. Love ya!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

hahaha....done that...exhaustburns aswell...still sits with a elbow nicely f?????cked up.....and didn't even had a juicy one to make me do that......
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

Been there done that. You captured it well.
Bravo

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

life does have its ups and downs

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

Intuition is usually right! Love your poem.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

Josie, great write. Hate when that happens. Received many road burns in my life. Fortunately lucky and still here. Glad it all worked out for you.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

although your shoulder and knee hurts, glad you're okay...and i love the way you tell the story! you are unique among poets, josie...one of my very favorites, because you can write about ANYTHING! your words capture the imagination from the get-go, and linger after the last word is read...outstanding! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

good write, josie! love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) d***, i almost put CALIFORNIA! i don't live in california! DUH! LOL

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

Wow...This was great....loved the metaphor...excellent message,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

This is excellent write...enjoyed this much...BHUWAN

Reviewed by J John (Reader)

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

Very much enjoyed :) J & J

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on March 26, 2003

I was looking for you Josie..
You have the ability to take ANY subject and weave it into words
we devour as with this one..
MOST EXCELLENT
Your friend always and forever
ERICA~