over and out (poem) by Josephine M Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

sleep tight
don't let the bedbugs bite

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

I hope you rested well :)
NOW WAKE UP and write more kick a** poems

LOL to Elizabeth's "sniff corks"

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

hey works for me sometimes - and it did for you too, not a thing wrong with this one :-)

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

now that was truly a stream of consciousness drop right there!. lol...gotta let these thoughts out, release all inhibitions between the body and the mind so that your pen becomes the direct conduit to your soul. i see you're well on the way, over there...blessings, poet...

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

terrific write, josie! :) (((HUGS))) love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Works for me... Hate those nights.. hey can be endless.. BUT look what came of it.. this awesome write.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

(((josie))) i feel the pain resonating throughout this poem...i've been there...tomorrow is another day, yesterday has passed...hope it's better...you are NOT stupid...i love you and your poems, josie...drunken or not HA (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

I loved this. How did I miss this one? It cries honey. Well done. Teresa

Reviewed by Digital Fairy

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

"I want right now
to crawl into
a safe place
of
acceptance
and
love"

Yeah me too... this was very good, I wish I could write something this way...

--Karissa

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Always love your writing...a true poet you are!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Jo no matter what you write...it is always heartfelt and a good read...I dont drink so you have one on me...love...floria

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Ah, how deeply I felt these words this morning, No matter what you write, it moves me, you are such a wonderful poet,

Excellent!

Reindeer

Reviewed by a- maryllis

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Love the category!! :D
Great write!

Reviewed by J. R. Corbin

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

hi sweetie,
been there, done that.
:)

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Lets hope you remember writing this
after your hangover pills:))

Very well done..

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

I relate!...except for the drinking which doesn't mix with the miserable meds.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

I drink and then I write, and usually like you I don't know if it was about baseball, sex, or GOLF.

Reviewed by Little Miss...

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Josie...
OMG not another one YIKES! John "thinks" when he drinks and that`s a self made Hell :(
lol Tomorrow is another day ;)

Love Jilly & John x

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Josie, WOW!!! you guys stay up late. I was in bed by 10:00PM EST Gotta get my beauty sleep. ( lol ) I get up at 4:00AM for work. Nice final note here Josie. Good Night.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

We all go through that Josie..And like you I just wanna curl up in the arms of the love of my life so he can tell me how wonderful I am....lol *he's a great tale teller* When I drink I write ......nasty, cruel, mean, dreary poetry.....Oh shit.....no I am not an alcoholic I do write some nice stuff! lmao

Sweet dreams Josie....Ty, Dani

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Me too, you two. It's 1 am here, and my muse has dried up. My bed is calling me. Nice poem, Josie. A glass of wine sounds heavenly, but alas, I am diabetic. I just sniff corks now. [smiles]

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on April 25, 2003

Oh yes Josie, how I know that feelng! At this moment I am feeling the same thing as you felt. I keep thinking just one more comment and then to bed. Goodnight dear Lady. I am going to hang it up now. Bill