precipice (poem) by Josephine M Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

It does give you ladies something to think about. Brought a smile to may face.

Reviewed by The Dork Desiree

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

Hey aunt josie--liked this one :)
love ya, dez

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

Enjoy the humor in this.

Nancy

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

this is great love it
excellent

William

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

Nice one Josie..

Peace and huggs, Dove ~

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

hahahahahahahahaha...love it!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

LOL it's not the fall that's the bad part...it's that sudden stop at the end *ow*

been there...fell off a ski lift once...30 feet...that mud and snow wasn't too soft...but THANK GOD i didn't break, strain or bruise anything...EVERYTHING hurt for three days...walked like an old gramma LOL

ponder away, josie, and keep bitching...you're my favorite bitch! LOL you must be inside my head...'cause what you rant about, there's me, "EXACTly!!!" LOL

((((HUGS)))) and much love,

karla. :)

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

we can't quit bitching, it's too satisfying :-)

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

Josie this is so very excellant, darn how I hate when I get so lost in all those thoughts of wondering...sometimes they consume me! ;O)
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

good write, josie!!
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

Great thoughts to ponder. Nice write Josie

Reviewed by Mom

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

This was written very well. :) Love, Mom

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

josie, wonderful. This is like a platform with no sides. Don't lose your balance. You gave me a wonderful idea for a poem. Thanks for the inspiration.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

good write, josie! :) (((HUGS)))

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

OOOPPPPSSSS...lol
Josie, I'm so sorry
about the name...
I was just reading
Eileen's comment...
Everything stands
below, except for
the name...lol

Trixie :)

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

Hi Dearest Eileen,
Oh I love this write..
Really gives one something to think about....

Yes, I"m back to stay.

Big Hugs
Trixie :)

Reviewed by Reilly

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

I wonder what some thought I would think it was faces of ppl you love but at that point you are in something much more than you

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

Josie, this is great compassion, cause I know you wouldn't think those thoughts about yourself, or too many of us would kick ass so good, you wouldn't sit for awhile!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 5, 2003

Some learn to fly, and some crash, birds I mean, Humans are dependent on one another. If you are flying, someone will tell you you can't and when you listen to them you then go Boom.