in the deepest part of me
there
is you
never touched before
never even seen
I
didn’t
even know it was there
didn’t even know
what’s
the
lesson
will someone please tell me
what’s the lesson
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Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on June 8, 2003
Josie in all it's hallow haunting upon you and we readers this is AWESOME...reminds me of a line from the movie DUNE..."the sleeper has awakened!"
~Nikki~
A jaded cold case investigator finds himself trying to solve a thirty year old mystery when the skeletal remains of two missing teenagers are found in a national park.
~Nikki~
Love it! :)
Mom
Evena Lesson Is To Be Learned From Which You Just Wrote!
TRASK
Keep chasing your dreams Lass, and when you catch them, you will then know, the lesson too!
Sincerely,
Rodney Evan Bohen
Even more if I think of someone very special to me!!
Love
Tinka
*tears* i don't know why this tiny verse touches me so...powerfully expressed
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :(
Reindeer
May Lu $*_*$ a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)