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Carpet or Wood?
by H. Lena Jones → (All Poetry by H. Lena Jones)
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Sometimes my thoughts churn out the most unusual material, especially when I'm vacuuming... :)

Carpet or Wood?


by


h. lena jones


 


If I had to chose between carpet or wood


The characteristic I ought to have


I would make my decision


After pondering the characteristics


Of the materials themselves!


 


Carpet is pliable, soft, and colourful


Carpet feels warm and comfortable underfoot


Carpet gives the impression of luxury


Is inviting and beckons you to


Slip off shoes and have a roll


But carpet hides fluff and dirt


By its nature is deceptive


It builds up static electricity


For a sudden unexpected shock attack


And makes you sneeze when you


Disturb buried dust in its weaves


Carpet is easily discarded


Once signs of overuse are observed!


 


Wood on the other hand


Is shiny and slick


Hard underfoot, but solid in support


Exposes foreign irritants, holds no prisoners


Like fluff and scuff, even dirt and spills


Thus easy to clean


Wood floors have nothing to hide


And can look quite stunning


With a few scatter rugs


Wood floors stand the test of time


And when in bad shape


Can be sanded, polished, and made like new!


 


So then the question I must ask myself is this


Would I rather store up earthy treasures


Like fluff and dirt, just to enjoy temporary pleasures


Such as a roll in the weaves


OR would I rather have Heavenly treasures


And enjoy forever pleasures?


 


Would I rather hide my defects


Or dare I expose them to the One who can restore me


In spite of my scuffs and dents


And make me brand new, like a fresh minted coin?


The choice indeed is obvious!


 


“The heart of the righteous studieth to answer;


but the mouth of the wicked poureth out evil things.”


(Proverbs 15:28)


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 Reviews of "Carpet or Wood?"
Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on October 22, 2006
Lena,

Another of your BRILLIANT presentations!

Indeed, you obviously CHOSE CHRIST...indeed, I CHOSE HIM, too!

You ROCK, Sister!
Love&Hugs, Rhonda

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2006
The Choice indeed is obvious this is so well expressed Lena and I like your vacumming muse :)

Blessings,
Joselyn

Reviewed on October 21, 2006
Very philosophical, excellent work!
Love, B&R

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 21, 2006
You wax philosophical here dear Lena, and do so in your inimitable style. I believe that the wisest choices always come after prayer.

Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2006
Tounge and groove wood.. MAkes the place seem bigger and easier to clean... I would wood, wood would, would you wood..

Reviewed on October 21, 2006
Wonderful writing yet again, Lena; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on October 21, 2006
Lena,

I love this one. Myself, I love wood best...especially since Our Saviour hung on a tree (cross) for our sins...........well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on October 21, 2006
Lena, this is such an unusual poem! You obviously "set your affections on things above, not on things on the earth," for even your vacuuming chores become an opportunity for soul-searching and renewed resolves.
We're planning to buy a new L.R. carpet, but after reading this, can I really trust a carpet? This is a marvelous analogy, and I think one that will stay with me.
Bless you,
Connie

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2006
As usual you come up with some spiritual inspiration. But even wood is prone to some termite attack, so we must always be on the alert. Victor

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on October 21, 2006
Never thought of comparing wood and carpet to heavenly treasures but you have done it extroadinarily well. Your writing is superb.

Rusty

Reviewed by Lew Duffey
Reviewed on October 21, 2006
Wood floors stand the test of time
And when in bad shape
Can be sanded, polished, and made like new!

This starts out like a home improvement commercial and ends up a self improvement message. A spiritual look at what we walk on everyday and too ofter overlook.
Great Write.
God Bless,
Lew

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on October 21, 2006
Lena, this is one of my all-time favorites from you. This has such a meaningful metaphor. You constantly amaze me with your wonderful messages and how you weave the Almighty throughout with timeless lessons of love. Outstanding work, sweet lady. You have outdone yourself.
Much love and appreciation,
CJ


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