Hope, caressing, working all go together well and liked the 3 verses. Your imagination was working well with these. Hope to read more soon. You are rich in thoughts and can pass them on.
Dear Ken
These are wonderful! I especially love the last!
I've been writing haikus of late, and discovered thru a fellow denner that most of them are actually Senryu... Haiku traditionally focus on seasons, and senryu (Japanese 17 syllables also) are freer, often ironical or sartorial in nature. Even still, upon reading some old haiku books I find that haiku has extended its boundaries for centuries. Let me know what you discover if poss. Thank you so much Ken... which appropriately means knowledge!
Love & friendship Suzie :-D
I love these, especially the first one. Beautiful pictures!
Leann
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ellen george
I think there should be more of your poetry in your den. :-)
Axilea
Jean
Regis
Wonderfully done, Ken, and welcome to AD--you're among friends.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
These are wonderful! I especially love the last!
I've been writing haikus of late, and discovered thru a fellow denner that most of them are actually Senryu... Haiku traditionally focus on seasons, and senryu (Japanese 17 syllables also) are freer, often ironical or sartorial in nature. Even still, upon reading some old haiku books I find that haiku has extended its boundaries for centuries. Let me know what you discover if poss. Thank you so much Ken... which appropriately means knowledge!
Love & friendship Suzie :-D