As In Tear's For Your Lost Little Children On No Fathers Day Ever To Come... (poem) by - - - - - -

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 24, 2004

Such a powerful and deeply moving write Trask! This was excellent,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

POWERFUL, my dear friend...
Thank you for writing for and about
our precious children of the world...

~Linda

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 22, 2004

Powerful write Trask!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2004

ALL children are sacred gifts from the Creator and should be treated as such!!! Anyone who abuses them should be sent straight to the gas chamber, or at the very least be made unable to have any at all!!!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 20, 2004

your intent is loud and clear!

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2004

Very Powerful write, Dear Poet Trask! ...Heartwrenching! ...I totally agree with Zenith Elliott's review, especially when he said, "the issues that you speak of transcend all cultures, races, religions and creeds!"

Cynthia

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on June 20, 2004

Oh wow! Trask this one was so full of fire and rightly so.It almost made me cry,it was so powerful yet sad,poor little babes in trash bins...heartbreaking!
Well done.
Best wishes
from
kay

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on June 20, 2004

There is nothing worse than a parent or parents that abuse, misuse or put anything before their children. Children are gifts from God, they are our future and it saddens me when people bring children into the world and treat them like garbage. I believe people need to be honest...if you are not ready to give up a lifestyle that involves gangs, substance abuse, infidelity, selfishness and the list goes on and on then don't have children. This world is filled with children that could use/need big brothers/sisters or someone that could adopt or just spend some time doing positive and constructive activities that could make all the difference in the world to a child. Trask, I totally understand where you are coming from with this write...but the issues that you speak of transcend all cultures, races, religions and creeds. Thank you for your words. ~Z~

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 20, 2004

I have watch Judge Judy last night, there was this rich father charged his daughter for bills she had not paid; but she was spoiled beyong rotten.

Her father bought her a limo at age 8, all her brothers and sisters had limos to themselves. When the judge asked her how many limos are there in the family, she couldn't even give the judge an answer rightaway, for she probably didn't even where to start counting.

She told the father that if he keeps on sending her money, she will be use it, but will be disgusted with him.

Just to show you that there are really this kind of Dads in the world.

~ Sandie May Angel :o) ~

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2004

Trask,

i will be honest here ya know I have spanish grand children and these young men are precious they work two jobs to feed my grandchildren they are citizens of USA now they pay their taxes. Go to churh and are raising some very decent you children. But on the other hand i know just as with every race ya got the bad and the good and even them ugly ones abusers So im sure many children dont wish or have a dad today to wish fathers day too the worlds a mess Trask.. Such a mess...

Lady Peg