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As Nothing Ever Opens Your Eyes Until You The One Becomes Victim Of Crime...
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ONE Victim Of Worlds Greatest MARTYR'S Is:
" AMERICAS MOST WANTED "...

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_7-25-04

To Become GoodCritic You Don't Complain,
You Don't Read Between Lines,You Refrain
Simply Because What You Read Is Truth_

Until It Affects You"$Your Walllet$"Then
You Got To PAY For Funeral-Death,Is When
It Is You-Your Child,Daughters Molested_

Raped, Mamed,Killed-Only Then You Do It,
Something About It, "COMPLAIN" You Fit,
Become Next To Worlds Greatest Martyr_

California,Other States,Prisons HoldOver
80% Mexicanos Illegals,Gang Bangers,Over
85% Drunkened Driving Accidents/Arrests_

Mexicanos Illegals,Over 75% Schools,Our
Systems-California Are Children ByFar Of
Mexicanos Illegals Aliens--Gang Bangers_

"ILLITERATES WHO REFUSE TO BE EDUCATED",
PARENTS WHO COULD CARE LESS, MEDICATED
On DRUGS,BOOZE,LAZYNESS,PLAIN, PURE_

ADULTERERATED IGNORANCE- REFUSE TO LEARN
SPEAK "ENGLISH", THINK $MONEY$, YEARN
TO BE KNOCKED UP AGAIN N AGAIN, CLAIM_

RELIGION-ONLY IT'S $FREE TICKET$ TO YOUR
LOCAL WELFARE/DPSS OFFICE IN NAME, SURE,
"ESPANOL ENGLESE" ARROGANCE- ILLEGALS_

Are BRUNT Of All CRIME,Drugs,Theft,Child
Molestations,Rapes,Maiming,Killing,Wild
Child- Graffitti,Freeway Chases, Wow_

Even Getten It Off Climaxing Starting It
Endless Out Of Control Fires In Sick Fit
Freaked Out (F--ked Up) VIVA LA-

LA (Los Angeles)- LA-LITTLE ME-HE-CO!_

..........How Do YOU All Get EDUCATED!?_

READ/ACCESS PUBLIC RECORDS, READ/ACCESS
DAILY NEWSPAPERS AS EVEN THEY WACKCESS,
DO NOT ALWAYS PRINT ALL THE TRUTH,IT IS_

Still Only What Is Left Of The TRUTH_

I Typed Alot Of Above In All Caps, Maybe
It Will Be Easier For You to Read, Maybe
Then You Can,Will Become A Great Critic_

Not A Complainer/Cry Baby Of Your Own Be
IGNORANCE! When I Write,I Do Not WriteBe
Tween Lines-So,Don't You Cry Baby's Read

Between Lines! You Have Somthing To Say,
Come Out Live In Real World, Live Dismay
In Streets With Poor Blacks N Whites_

.....LIKE GET INTO SOME "STREET SMARTS"_

Better Yet Go Live N Join Mexicanos Sick
Illegals Gang Bangers,i.e.You Quick Sick
Blindless,Brainless,(Mindless) Bastards_

Wouldn't Last Make It To End Of Today!!_

Like Shut F--k Up Before You Speak, Open
Your"BIG MOUTH",Learn To Read,Write,Open
Big Mouth When You Know What You Are_

" TALKING ABOUT" Trust My Word Of (God),
Then You Will Become A Great Critic,Sod
Not Of Just Words,But Exactly THE TRUTH_

Do Not Become Commonplace (Disgrace)To
Your Own Ignorant Arrogant (Face) Race_

Me, TRASK, In Your Ugly Face...

Retribution, TRASK c 2004 TRASK

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FEAR Is At DOWNFALL Of All Your Problems
But,You AsINDIVIDUAL Create All Problems
When 5% Of Wealth $BILLIONARES$ Control_

USA GOVERNMENT/POLITICIANS SPECIAL INTERESTS_

You, Your Lives, Very Fate At Stake, You
Truly Deserve Be Raped,Maimed,Killed,You
Are What Has Happened To This Once_

GREAT (F--KED UP) USA - DISMAY GO PLAY
With Your Childish Words,Go Continue,SAY
Nothing,Do Nothing,Deserve Yes, NOTHING_

CONTROLLED BY GREED MONGERING BASTARDS_

YES, BECOME " AMERICAS MOST WANTED ",YOU
The Next " WORLDS GREATEST MARTYR "...

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BELIEVE THESE 3 SIMPLE LAWS OF (God):

...There Is RIGHT And WRONG_

...There Is LOVE (Compassion) And HATE_

...There Is GOOD (God) And EVIL (Satan)_

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Hey- YOU Go Become One Of Satan's Little Pussies!!!

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 Reviews of "As Nothing Ever Opens Your Eyes Until You The One Becomes Victim Of Crime..."
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on July 27, 2004
Brilliantly written, kind friend...
The three simple law's of God are right on and well put!
Outstanding write as always from you!

Your True Friend,
~Linda

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on July 27, 2004
Harsh words, bringing it to the point.
The ending - the 3 simple laws of God - are brilliant. Actually easy to follow, if you can differ!
Some people obviously can't
Good one.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on July 27, 2004
The last line made me smile.Well,I am no pussy as you know and I dare not become one,neither are you a pussy trask
but your poems are sometimes similar to wild cats when your passion for subject matter purrs or grows nails...like in this fiery poem...it snarls and scratches a little but only at the fiend or the fiendish in this life,it's really tigerish,fiery and filled with your steadfast convictions which anyone reader have to admire.
Best wishes
from
your purring fan
Kay.
(meeeooooowwww...wink wink!)

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on July 26, 2004
As the rich get richer and pay no taxes, the divisions between haves and have nots expands: no taxes for police, no taxes to help, no taxes for schools, no taxes for single-moms. Then the violent, selfish, rich Americans will have to pay the piper, or hide out in their exclusive gated communities.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 25, 2004
Oops someone made you MAd Trask!!

Hope I did not in your Badbooks today!!

Thanks for this offering/rant straight in my ugly face/grace..but still a joy to read you...Tee-Hee!!

Take a break have a Kit Kat and become sweet Good/True friend again okay!!

Love Tinka


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