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I Must OPEN Your Eyes WIDE To Sleeping GIANT!
Not Greatest Giant All Dull Movies Not
Beginning But THE END OF TITANIC, Ought
Boy Falls In Love With Young Girl,Sigh_
Giant Titanic Sunk By Giant Ice Berg,As
Hours To Go Down, Men Cheated DEATH Has
Get On Life Boats Before Women,Children_
In Its LAST Gaspt It Sunk Literally So
Many 100's Of Bodies In Life Jackets Tho
Floating (Dead) In Freezing Waters! But_
Young Boy (No Life Jacket) Pulls Girl To
FloatingPiecePlywood(In Life Jacket)True
He Hangen On ElbowsFreezing Holding Her_
Hands, He Assuring Her She Was Safe_
As Incoherent She Feel Alseep( As All
Dead Bodies Do Go Numb) To Awaken, Fall,
She Sees Him Still Hanging There By His_
Elbows Frozen Dead- She Reaches Out To
Him, Be Simply He Slides Off Sinks To
Bottom Ocean Like TIP OF ICEBERG! Other_
Bodies 100's Floating Listlessly On To
Freezing Ocean,But 1 Life Boat Goen Thru
Waters Yelling Is Their Anybody Alive_
Out There? She Rescued, Next Morning On
Same Rescue Boat Were Same Men Who Upon
"Cheated Death" From Sunken Titanic!She_
Went On Lived Old Age Raise Family- Only
THE END Be On Boat,DIE In Her Sleep,Only
To AWAKEN In Her DREAM As Young Girl On_
Giant Titanic - As She Ran Up Stairs To
Dancing Ballroom,She Saw 100's Same,True
People Around Room, Standen At Balcony_
Was Young Boy Who Had Saved Her Then In
Freezing Waters Sunken Giant Titanic,Sin
Hell Then: Heaven(?) Now She Ran To Him_
He Hugs, Kisses Her,Everybody Is Their
Clapping Their Hands In Good Grace_
IN MY BOOKS: Many Times Of POEMS Then I
Write Of Meeting My Lost Girlfriend,Why,
She As No Other Left Lasting Impression_
Just Before THE END: I Don't Know If Be
Movie Producer Thot It Up,Made It Up,See
Saw Fabricated THE END; But, IN TRUTH_
It Is (The Truth You Never Heard)_
While (God) Is Merciless-Should You As I
Follow ThatStraight Narrow Path You As I
Am On, His (God)'s PROMISE IN TRUTH_
JUST REWARD TO THOSE WHO ENDURTH TO THE END_
For When My Time Comes THE END,I Will Be
EXACTLY WHERE I WAS IN WINTER 65,I'll Be
At Doctors Office Sitting There,Looken_
Across From Me Is Her,Beautiful Young Be
Exotic Eyes Looken At Me,Thinking How,Me
Can I Meet Her?Again Doctor,She Will Be_
Looken At Me-My Broken Nose,Hugging Me,
Everything's Be OK! I'll Ask Her For Me
PLEASE Introduce Her To Me, And As Was_
I'll Leave;HER In My "Bad Ass" Olds,Cold
Freezing Ass Weather,Below 20 Degree,Old
No Way,On To Lipperts Cafe, Holding Her_
Peggys Hand's, Drinken Hot Coffee N Tea,
She Will Be 18 Years Old Again, Me,Free,
I'llBe 23 YearsOld Again,Forever Beyond_
Every WORD Above I WRITE Is TRUE Beyond
Any Religious(Satan Devil)Beliefs,Beyond
Any IMAGINATION Will COME TOO PASS!True_
Your Love Of Your Life, HE - SHE Is Not
In Or Of This Physical World! You Ought,
As YOU,All Humanity's Already In Satans_
Holy Hell - HOW CAN YOU NOT BELIEVE IT!?
When Wars,Famine, Huricanes,Tornandos,It
Disease, Death,Sickness,Homeless,Be Fit,
Your Our Starving Little Children_
DISAPPEAR 2000+ Each An Everyday,Dismay,
Fires,Deaths,Rapes,Maimings,Killings,Say
It Is Only That Truth You Never Heard_
If I Can GIVE YOU LEAST WORD Of HOPE, Do
COPE With You PAIN,Anguish,Suffering,Do
Follow Your Weary Narrow Path To Its_
Very THE END!For It May Just Be Me,TRASK
My Dream(Girl) Peggy Clapping Hands,Alas
All My Little Children Waving Hi To You_
On GIANT TITANIC Of Your(Unknown)Dreams,
Tear's,(God) True(Compassion) Love,Deems
Forever In Eye's Of (God) Me,TRASK, My_
Little Children Do Survive...
ME,"Poetic Prophet",TRASK c 2004 TRASK
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To Grow Old Is One Thing,Surely You Will
To Grow Old Gracefully, That Day,Until
You Die,Pass Over You Will Then Know_
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Truly, What Death (Gives) Is: As For Me_
I, TRASK Fear No Man,Beast Nor Satan,I
Fear For You, All Our Lost Little, Vie,
All Little Children In Satan's Holy Hell!
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I always love movies about true and unique love and deep compassion. Some might consider them dull !
Thanks for your review to my latest poem. You captured it even better than I did.
Amira
Excellent write Trask!!
Love Tinka
Gina
i don't put my faith in the movies, too much is twisted. powerful write, once again.
follow the straight and narrow--instead of following the broad road that leads to destruction
may others pay heed to your message
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(