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As Here's More I Don't Think Its Thought That Counts...
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READEN REGIS' PAST 2 WRITES YOU CANNOT KEEP LOOKEN BACK OR QUOTEN BIBLE-IT IS ALL GONE PAST MAN-TRUST ME IT IS ALL DEAD... ........................................... I,TRASK KEEP WRITING YOU GOT TO MAKE BEST OF WHAT LITTLE YOU GOT LEFT,To Just For Me Able For Drive Car To Bank,Store 2 Mornings Each Week Is Maken Best Of What Little I Got Left... PEOPLE I Meet Long Way Who Simply Go Nuts Over Car-You Just Don't See My Kinda Car On Streets Anymore...It's Maken Best Of What Little I Got Left_ AS I TRASK DRIVE ON INTO FUTURE...

1-16-07_ 2ND IN SERIES OF POEMS I WROTE TO MANY BEAUTIFUL GIRLS I MET L A ANTI-POVERTY AGENCY... LINDA RARE BEAUTY NOT KNOWN TO HERSELF: (Her Mexicanos Husband Beat Up All Time) I Walk Into Accounting Hand Her Invoice These Poems Ensued: ....................................... A POEM OF DREAMS AGAIN: Do You believe in Dreams,wish they'd come True I've Often wanted to tell of dreams about you, As time gone by,Eternity knows no end But,In writing this poem,I got to make my amend, I've just got to tell you things,I dig about you As you read on,how heavy this Is,if only you knew, Like: Hey,what does this guy want from me 1st of all friend of yoursI'd like to be As I have watched you,years have gone by Each time I've looked into your eyes, I saw things from past Across sands of time, and at last, All It will take Is moment of your time I am convinced of that happiness of mind You, Linda havenever come to know To Listen of that Dream that's about to grow.. A POEM OF CONFUSION: Would It be that I Might write something to you That Be So heavy,you could not Handle It, then to Maybe you think I go thru life Creating These kind of situations as to cause strife, You,Linda again,If only you knew My Dreams always come true ... A POEM OF I'M SORRY: How sad It Is to know that you are sorry,again Where my Dreams begin,they never end, You say you did not know I was so Poetic,then For what you cannot understand,again There are so many things you'll never know about me For It Is only Logic you will ever see, You have a Beauty so Rare That Most Intelligent Man never Dare, For If I was Type of man,again,that you, Linda,Are Subjected to Then You Linda would be Right where I Wanted You... PS: This Is Not A Game Nor Will Your Life Ever be The Same, This Is So Heavy,You Cannot Handle It So, As I See Fit, I'll Pass... Long Hair Dark Beauty Just Plain Naive, Had Low Opinion Of Herself... ....................................... ETAL: I Actually Had 3 Psychic Dreams Of Linda Prior To My Poems In Which We Had An Affair Sexual Realtions... ....................................... JOSE Was Floored When He Read 3 Poems, He Placed Poems In Her Invoice Basket, Thinken Gonna Knock Her Off Her Feet... IRRESPECTIVE THEY BLEW HER MIND: For Her To Even Say I Didn't Know You Were So Poetic,In Fact She Really Knew Nothing About Me At All.. ....................................... More Later To Come In Realm Of TRASK... ....................................... Never Commonplace Forever In Your Face! ME,TRASK "POETIC PROPHET" c 1979/2006 TRASK ....................................... BY YOU NOT TAKING CHANCE HOW MANY OF YOUR OWN DREAMS ARE FOILED SIMPLY THEY NEVER HAPPEN COME TOO PASS... ....................................... REFERENCE PREVIOUS POEM: It Is Not What You Think It Is Thought That Counts... 1ST In Series Of Poems I Wrote To many Beautiful Girls Past... ....................................... {{{{{{{ EYE OPENER SAY LEAST }}}}}}}}} I KNOW I CAN GO BACK IN TIME-But,Like Me What Would It Accomplish(?) I Can Tell You This Much To Be True: REALLY NONE OF YOU WOULD ENJOY IT ANYHOW SIMPLY IT JUST WAS NOT MEANT TO BE SO... ........................................

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on February 1, 2007

very opening your poems
tell so much about self (other/Linda)
they are freeing
enjoy-ing these

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 17, 2007

Thank you for revealing more of your "self," TRASK. This is well-expressed, my friend. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Thank you for sharing this very fine offering Trask!!

Love tinka

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on January 16, 2007

The "Realm of Trask" has a sweet savor in this fantastic progression of poems. Whoever says the past is only water under the bridge didn't read your book.

I'm telling you man, you are living up to your newest catch phrase - "never commonplace forever in your face" Well done, poignant, and utterly palatable.

Your friend ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Nicely done, Trask!!!

Revelations isn't part of the bible. It was added many centuries later hoping to scare the beJesus out of "true believers."

If you get a chance, read Eric Hoffer's works sometime. I think you'd like his candor.

Best,
Elizabeth

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)

----------Trask, something in you has changed drasticaly for the better in your beautiful muse...I feel and see a brand new anointing on your everlasting soul..You are the voice for the BROKEN...Yes I came back and missed you sssooo much!!!You still radiate the true deliever out of peoples pain and your the warrior looking out for the evil ones that lurk behind our backs...Praise the heavens the day God made you!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

I'm so happy I didn't pass this wonderful by you Trask.
Several of the poems included in this write have really touched me,the way you rolled it all smoothly together...excellent.You are so very original and no one could deny that.Top work Mr Trask!
Best wishes always to you and yours
From
Kay