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As I Made It Thusfar What's Your Problem...
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MY Few TRUE Friends ARE Priceless...


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3-7-07_

23RD-24TH IN SERIES OF POEMS I WROTE FROM MY 2ND PUBLISHED BOOK...

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BUTT 1ST THE SECRET DVD...

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MY FEW TRUE FRIENDS ARE PRICELESS:

SECRET DVD: I SAW IT ADVERTISED AT EVEN
OUR A D-SUMBODY GAVE TO GATEMAN BELIEVEN
IT HELP ME TO! STRANGE IT WOULDN'T PLAY_

ON MY COMPUTER-I EVEN REINSTALLED SOFT-
WARE,READEN HIS COMMENTS AFTER YOU-COUGH
WATCH 90 MINUTE DVD -YOU SIT DOWN WRITE_

BIG LIST OF THINGS THAT YOU DESIRE!

.......................................

GATEMAN CLAIMEN IT WILL CHANGE YOUR LIFE
THAT YOU (INDIVIDUAL) WRITE YOUR LIFE
IF THAT BEING CASE -THEN MY TRASK' LIFE_

IS ALREADY WRITTEN IN GOOD BOOK OF (GOD)
NOW I AM WRITING YOU HUMANITYS LIFE(SOD)
BEING SUCH I GAVE DVD BACK HE AWED_

ME,TRASK I ENDED SAY OVER 85% PEOPLE WHO
HAVE MILLION$ THEY GOT THERE MILLONS DUE
THROUGH CORRUPTED -"BEING DIS-HONEST"_

MY COMMENT FLOORED HIM! OTHER 15% EITHER
WORKED ASS OFF OR CAME DOWN THRU BEATER
THATS HARD WORKING HONEST FAMILY'S!

.......................................

AT THIS POINT UPON READEN THIS-DO ANY OF
YOUEVER STOP THINK"WHAT AM I DOING HERE"
RIGHT NOW-WHY YOUR LIVES SO SCREWED UP_

OR YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING SO GREAT -YOU
YOU GOT MILLION$ IN BANK, YOUR F--KEN DO
ALL THOSE CHICKS AS EVEN SCREWEN_

URINE SO-CALLED FRIENDS TOO!

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{{{{{{ HEED MY WORD OF (GOD) }}}}}}}}}}

DISASTER IN LIFE IS WHEN YOU THINK YOU
ARE DOING SO GREAT -TRUST MY WORD OF DUE
(GOD) WHEN YOU LEAST EXPECT IT IT-TRUE_

{{{YOU All WILL BE DOING SOONER SO BAD }}}

.......................................

{{{{{{{{ HERE'S REAL SECRET IF ANY IS }}}}}}}}

THERE IS NO *SECRET TO LIFE -YOU RESPECT
LIFE WILL BE GOOD TO YOU -"DISRESPECT
LIFE" -SOONER THAN LATER YOU WILL CRASH_

YOU WILL GO DOWN EVEN THO YOU HAVE MANY
MILLION$ IN BANK AS ALL THOSE CHICKS ANY
YOU F--KED!

{{{{{{ I KNOW I LOST YOU THUSFAR }}}}}}

.......................................

ME, TRASK I MAY BE (LOOK) POOR BUT,THEN
I GET IN MY CORVETTE DRIVE TO STORE,THEN
PEOPLE SIMPLY THINK I HAVE MILLION$_

{{{{{{{ NONE OF YOU READEN THIS }}}}}}}

YOU STILL DON'T GET IT!

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I CANNOT COUNT MY TRUE FRIENDS FIT ON
MY 1 HAND -TOTAL STRANGERS BECAME UPON
MY TRUE FRIENDS_

SHOULD I TRASK GOT MONEY $10 MILLIONS
BUCKS TODAY -1ST BUY NEW HOUSE- ZILLIONS
GET MY FORECLOSED HOUSE BACKSO I AM NOT_

LIVEN IN HOLE IN WALL ANYMORE! THEN I
WOULD FINISH BUILDING MY + DREAMS,DENY
NOT IN PROCESS HELP MY TRUE FRIENDS_

+ My Physical Dreams

BUY THEM NEW HOUSES, NEW CARS,NEW WHAT-
EVER THEIR HEARTS DESIRES! GIVE ALL GOT
REST $MILLION$ AWAY TO HELP OUR LITTLE_

CHILDREN STARVING BEING RAPED,KILLED IN
YOUR (HUMANITYS)STREETS OF HOLY HELL,SIN
SIMPLY YOU FORGET MY LIFE IS ALREADY_

WRITTEN BY ME, TRASK IN BEGINNING! WHEN
(GOD) KICKED MY ASS OUTA THAT UFO, THEN
AS LITTLE CHILD -HE (GOD) KNEW -3 WORDS_

SAID TO ME: "YOU BE GOOD" TRASK,I ANSWER
"DO-TELL"!(GOD) DISAPPEARED INTO(DANCER)
"THIN AIR"!HE KNEW I WOULD DOAS EXACTLY_

WHAT I TRASK SET OUT TO DO NO MATTER AT
WHAT BEFALL's ME-I GET BACK UP- AT THAT
KEEP ON GOING TO THE (MY) END-HAS IF I_

TRASK GO DOWN -I TAKE ALL YOU HUMANITY
RIGHTTO HOLY HELL WITH ME! NONE-INSANITY
OF YOU CAN EVEN BEGIN TO BELIEVE IT_

YOU HAVE YET TO AWAKEN FROM DEEP SLEEP
THAT YOU ALL ARE IN DEATHLY SIN!

{{{{{ YOU ALL ARE ALREADY IN HELL }}}}}}

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*SECRET TO LIFE: Your Just Rewards Are
Not In This Physical Life! It Your Just
Rewards Are"Your Worth"In Eyes Of (God)!

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A POEM OF I NEED:

I Need Is Most Misused (Phrases)Word In English Language,For
I Need Is To Majority-I WANT-THEN SUM Or
I Need Is, Give It To Me!But, Did Any Of You Earn It! For,
I Need is To Serve Humanity Not Greed! For
I Need Is What I Receive, Because What Your
I Need Is To Do, "GIVE OF YOURSELF TO ALL HUMANITY"!

c 1979/2007 TRASK

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A POEM OF IN YOUR MIND:

Where You Are You Are Still In Your Mind
Where You Will BeIn End Is Still In Time
Swear Time Is Eternity,Has Even This_

Earth (Illusion)Will Disappear In Time!

c 1979/2007 TRASK...

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NOW: Truly You Reading This As Prior
Poems Is Frightening -Then If It Prior
Scares Holy Hell Out of You -Then Might_

Just Be You Are Just ONE Of 2000 Souls
I TRASK Came To Earth (Holy Hell) Roles
You Few Will Have On New Plane With Me_

That Is In His The Eye's Of (God)...

.......................................

{{{{{{{{{{{ REALIZATION }}}}}}}}}}}}}

I,TRASK DO NOT FEAR NO MAN OR NOT EVEN
(GOD)-MY TIME IS NEAR THAT END,GET EVEN
YOUR LIFE IS (GRIEVEN) SHORTER! THERE'S_

NO THING THAT YOU HUMANITY CAN DO TO ME
TRASK THAT YOU ALREADY HAVE NOT DONE!ME
I AM NOT HUMAN I AM HUMANOID! WHERE I_

GO BACK TO (I DO NOT DIE) YOU AS HUMANS
DIE IN THIS WORLD YOU ALL WILL DO MANS
SINS-YOU ALL INNOCENT IS SAME AS BEING_

GUILTY! AGAIN IS NOT YOUR PRAYERS THAT
SAVE ANY OF YOU-IT IS YOUR UNWRITTEN AT
THOUGHTS(DEEDS) AS CAREFULLY RECORDED_

WORTH THAT ARE ACCOUNTED FOR IN HIS THE
EYE'S OF(GOD)"NOT YOUR WORDS OF PRAYER"!

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{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{ IF ANY SECRET TO LIFE }}}}}}}}}}}}}}}

SECRET: I Have Done Things With My Two
Hands (God) Gave Me, I Have Created Due
Things In My Mind None Of You Humans_

"Can Even Begin To Imagine" Exists!

My FORECLOSED HOUSE Was Only Beginning
Of What Evil (Satan) Humans Who (Ding)
Live In It! They All Better Enjoy Its _

(God) Given Beauty What Is Left Of It
While They Can For Soon It Will Fit
Disappear (Burn) Like Rest This Evil_

World Will Be CONSUMED In Its $TOTAL
F--KEN GREED$! In Other Words BLOAT(EL)
You (Humans) As This Evil World Will-

{{{{{{{{{ SIMPLY IMPLODE }}}}}}}}}}}}}}

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{{{ YOU SAY YOU BELIEVE IN JESUS}}}}}}

YOU Better START Praying TO Whom Ever
Urine GOD Is,i.e. ENJOY What LITTLE Ever
(Grieve) TIME Any Of YOU Have GOT Left...

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Never Commonplace Forever In Your Face...

ME,TRASK "POETIC PROPHET"c 2007 TRASK...

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{{{{{{ The Truth You Never Heard }}}}}}}

YOU Are Here TO GIVE To Humanity-LAW Of
INCREASE Does The Rest, The FLAW Of
Your Own WITHOLDING Keeps You DOWN_

NO MATTER HOW_

{{{ MANY GREEDY MILLION$ YOU GOT IN BANK }}}

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 Reviews of "As I Made It Thusfar What's Your Problem..."
Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 9, 2007
I think I started sweating reading this right on write.

I also think that I've figured it out Trask - you're like fingernails on a blackboard that produces diamonds of wisdom. The poems are great. I know that God smiled when you wrote them.

I think you got your ass kicked outa the UFO for a reason - you woulda probably took over and they needed yur brain on planet earth for the days that we're in. Rock on!

Your friend ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 8, 2007
Wow! That is quite an avalanche of thoughts and philosophy, TRASK. Thank you for sharing, my friend. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2007
Hi Trask, cool banner at the top of your page! I agree with you, we're not that great. No not one. Some just think they are.
Powerful write. I too can count my friends as being very few; don't trust no one, but as for God, he's the only one I do fear.
You write a lot about perverts and take a strong stand on issues that many would rather turn a blind eye to. I give you credit. holly

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2007
So...do you feel better now? ROFL.

Love,
Elizabeth

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 8, 2007
Interesting read Trask!!

Love Tinka


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