WHEN YOU LOOK AT TOP OF YOUR POETRY PAGE
AND THERE'S ? MARKS IN FRONT EACH (POEM)
TITLE NOT DOTS AS EVERYBODY ELSE -I CAN_
ASSUME EVEN DEN MASTER DOESN'T LIKE
ME "REALLY WHO CARES" ! PUT ICING LIKE
ON CAKE, I CANNOT AFFORD PAY $29.95_
MEMBERSHIP FEE! MY S S PAYS MY HOLE IN
WALL RENT,BALANCE CAR INSURANCE $ -SIN
I CAN GO STORE BY GROCERIES,NOT FOR MY_
F S, I'D BE SLEEPING IN MY CAR AGAIN!
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REALLY WHO IF ANYBODY CARES,i.e.I MUST
GIVE CREDIT-LINDA HILL: PAID 1ST,(DUST)
MEMBERSHIP AND SHE WOULD NOT ACCEPT ME_
PAYING $ HER BACK FOLLOWING YEAR!
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IN LIEU OF I'VE BEEN CALLED DOWN TOO
MANY TIMES BY A D FOR CRITICIZING TOO
MANY SO-CALLED POEMS-ILLITERATES WHO_
THINK THEY CAN WRITE-INSTANT- RUN LIKE
CRY BABY'S-COMPLAIN TO DEN MASTER- LIKE
WISE MOST GOOD WRITERS ARE GONE HISTORY_
THEY ARE NO LONGER AT AUTHORS DEN!
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REALLY THERE'S NO INCENTIVE TO STAY AS
A D IS NOT VIBRANT COMMUNITY- IT IS AS
BUNCH OF ILLITERATES WHO JUST CANNOT_
STOP BELIEVING THEY THINK THEY KNOW IT
ALL!DON'T HAVE TO MENTION ANY NAMES, FIT
YOU ALL KNOW WHO YOU ARE_
IN LIEU OF - MATT'S ONLY INTERESTED IN
SELL- MEMBERSHIPS IT IS EQUIVALENT, SIN
LIKE SELLING FORECLOSED HOMES - SIMPLY_
IF YOU DO NOT -YOU ALL AS BANKS ARE GONE
BANKRUPT - YOU ARE OUT OF BUSINESS!
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{{{ WHY I JUST CANNOT STOP LAUGHING }}}
PHOTO: ON TO SAN DIEGO LAND SLIDES -IT
TELLS STORY "BITCH" CRAWLING* *UNDER IT
NO TRESPASSING TAPE OUT OF HER(LAUGH)_
** LA-GONA-HILLS TO HOLY HELL FOR SURE!
"$MILLION$ HOME",DO I FEEL SORRY FOR HER
OR ANY OF THEM! I NEVER EVEN GAVE HER
OR THEM THOUGHT UNTIL I WROTE THIS PIECE_
PROBLEM IS: LIKE I ENDED UP**SLEEP IN MY
CORVETTE 5 LONG MONTHS -THIS BITCH WILL
VIE-SELL PAINTINGS SHES CARRYING OR IF_
** VIA MY FRAUDULENT FORECLOSED HOME!
LUCKY HER INSURANCE WILL PAY ENOUGH, SHE
CAN MOVE IN EXPENSIVE S D APARTMENT, BE
REST $COKE MONEY$ SHE USED TO BUY HOME_
SHE'LL GET AWAY WITH MURDER,NEVER BE
COME ONE MILLIONS HOMELESS USA WHO -SEE
SLEEP,IN STREETS USA MOST ARE LITTLE CHILDREN_
!AND NOT ONE OF YOU COULD EVEN CARE LESS!
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{{{{{{{{{{{{{{{ IT IS TRUTH }}}}}}}}}}}}}}}
WHILE 5 MONTHS AT MY **SPACE.COM,I'VE
MADE MORE TRUE FRIENDS EVEN THO I'VE
DELETED LITERALLY 1,000 PORNO CHICKS SELLING _
THEIR PIC'S!I WRITE THERE AN OTHER AUTO
MAGAZINES WHERE I'M APPRECIATED, LOTTO
KOOL REVIEWS FOR JUST GIVING MY INPUT!
** MY SPACE.COM IS FREE!
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{{{ I LEAVE YOU WITH THIS POEM }}}}}
A POEM OF INTELLIGENCE:
Intelligence Is Not Something That You See
It Is Something That You Hear,It Is Decree
For All Humanity To Undertake
In Every Human Life,It Is Not Word To Forsake
For I Am Told I Am An Intellect
And,In Every Respect This Is Correct
To Know Pitfalls Of Humanity Is More Than
Intelligence,It Is Spirit of Being Right,Take a Stand
For All Your Lifetime,For It May Be This Very Night
You Should Die,It May Even Be Of Fright
For It May be Me TRASK You Will See
In Your Sleep This Very Night,Will Your Soul Be Free
Can You Handle This Poem,Can You Accept What Is Right?
Listen To Me,TRASK,Help Set Your Soul Free This Very Night
Intelligence Is Not Something That You See...
c 1979/2007 TRASK....
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{{{{ CREDIT GIVEN WHERE CREDIT DUE }}}}
BIGGEST CREDIT GOES TO RICHARD CEDERBERG
FOR HIS COMPLIMENTS AS EVEN THEY ARE
ENCOURAGEMENT TO MOVE ON TO GREATER_
PLACES LEAD TO GREATER THINGS ACCOMPLISHED!
AND TO: KAREN PALUMBO-NO ONE HAS IS
KINDER THAN HER THOUGHTS AS REVIEWS!
YOU OTHER FEW IF WHO CARED IF I DID NOT
MENTION NAMES: YOU'RE IN MY HEART,OUGHT
ALL THAT IS IMPORTANT IN EYES OF (GOD)!
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Never Commonplace Forever In Your Face...
ME, TRASK "POETIC PROPHET" c 1979/2007 TRASK...
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{{{{{{{{ ON EVEN BIGGER NOTE }}}}}}}}}
MANY PEOPLE WHO I HAVE E MAILED POEMS
WHO CRITIQUED MY WORKS,THEY HAVE ALSO
MOVED ON TO WHERE EVER IT IS IN TIME_
JANET CLAYTON, EDITOR AT **L A TIMES NO
LONGER WORKS THERE! GONE BANKRUPT, THO
REASON - MILLIONS "ILLEGALS MEXICANOS"_
DO NOT SPEAK WORD OF ENGLISH OR DO BUY
READ ENGLISH SPEAKING NEWSPAPERS...
**I JUST HAPPEN TO PICK UP TODAYS
NEWSPAPER BLOCKING FRONT DOOR OPEN!
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{{{{ AIN'T NOTHING BUT THE TRUTH }}}}}}
MY NEW CHINA GIRL (FRIEND) BORN,RAISED
IN CHINA SPEAKS-WRITES-TALKS ACURRATE_
"FLUENT ENGLISH"!
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YET: LITERALLY MILLIONS EL ESTUPIDO ASS
F--KING ILLEGALS MEXICANOS CANNOT PASS
REFUSE TO LEARN SPEAK ANY ENGLISH_
TRUST MY WORD OF (GOD) HE ONLY DOES FIT
"UNDERSTAND ENGLISH" YOU SPEAK ANY IT
OTHER LANGUAGE -NO WORD- GO STRAIGHT_
for those of us who track you, who are interested in the words you speak/write this is a saddening thing as others have stated I read you don't always get a chance to comment to let you know how you do inspire thought and reason I got a my space page but i spend less time on their as i do here I hope to be able to read you again
I know how you feel. I can't afford to join; have to have others sponsor me; very embarrassing, but what can I do? Please don't go; we need you here! You are in my prayers, and I hope that you find the joy in your life; you can't go around being angry all the time. It's not healthy. Look where it's gotten me. Now with my (new) health woes, I have to be careful not to get so angry; yet at times I can't help it. Still, I try to not let things bother me, I know it's easier said than done, but I AM trying. God be with you, Trask, and know that I will miss your rantings here! (You have a right to say what you think, and I admire you for it. You've got guts; I couldn't say half the stuff you say here! LOL)
(((HUGS))), much love, and prayers~ Your friend, Karen Lynn in Texas. :( >tears! <
You seem to be filled with such anger Trask. I pray that your heart will be softened and that you will be filled with compassion for others no matter what their station in life. People can disapoint and hurt you because human beings are not perfect but when they do hurt you, remember this - A hurting person, hurts. There is no defense for love.
Yes I know that it is hard to release the pain of those years you felt rejection but if you do, you will enjoy a great sense of freedom.
I know how it feels to be displaced and my heart goes out to the victims of this disaster. What a tragedy!
Glad you made "friends" in your new domain. Personally, I don't get why you would call the woman in that pic a "Bitch" (I read that article too). These folks by the way are NOT covered by landslide insurance and are losing the fruits and security of their labors. Y'know I too went through something similar years ago...yeah I lived in my car too...But dude, it seems you hate all who work hard and earn what they own. Give it up. The world is not perfect, but it is what you make of it without blaming everyone else for you own shortcomings. To these folks and their families and anyone with a heart, it is NOT a laughing matter. Grow Up...get off the SS handout and make a go of it for gods sake man.
Don't go. I'm sorry you can't afford membership...wish I could sponsor you. :( Living on $225.00/month. Not complaining, God's been good to me. Not rich, but making it. :)
I tried MySpace: all I kept doing was getting proposals from weirdos! Had enough, dropped it.
I am saddened that you are leaving, but understand that following one's heart and drum beat is most important. I thank you for this time that our paths have crossed and with all my heart and soul wish you well. I have a spot on myspace.com but have not used it in months. Perhaps we will get to meet from time to time there and I can still read your writings......
peace
George
I know how you feel. I can't afford to join; have to have others sponsor me; very embarrassing, but what can I do? Please don't go; we need you here! You are in my prayers, and I hope that you find the joy in your life; you can't go around being angry all the time. It's not healthy. Look where it's gotten me. Now with my (new) health woes, I have to be careful not to get so angry; yet at times I can't help it. Still, I try to not let things bother me, I know it's easier said than done, but I AM trying. God be with you, Trask, and know that I will miss your rantings here! (You have a right to say what you think, and I admire you for it. You've got guts; I couldn't say half the stuff you say here! LOL)
(((HUGS))), much love, and prayers~ Your friend, Karen Lynn in Texas. :( >tears! <
Yes I know that it is hard to release the pain of those years you felt rejection but if you do, you will enjoy a great sense of freedom.
I know how it feels to be displaced and my heart goes out to the victims of this disaster. What a tragedy!
Chanti xxx
Don't go. I'm sorry you can't afford membership...wish I could sponsor you. :( Living on $225.00/month. Not complaining, God's been good to me. Not rich, but making it. :)
I tried MySpace: all I kept doing was getting proposals from weirdos! Had enough, dropped it.
I wish you the best.
(((HUGS))), love and prayer, Karla.
Be always well
Be safe,
Karen