Look! at the flying birds,
in what faith are they singing in the sky.
Look! at the blooming flowers,
in what nectar are they growing in the garden.
Don't let the palace of your life crumble,
Your values and base will diminish.
Look! at the colourful butterflies,
in what dreams are they floating before you.
Look! at the burning fire,
in what ashes is it living inside of you.
Don't let the palace of your life crumble,
Your values and base will diminish.
Look! at the twinkling stars,
in what darkness are they glowing in the night.
Look! at the cascading waterfall,
in what depth is it falling down from the height.
Don't let the palace of your life crumble,
Your values and base will diminish.
Copyright 2006 Roshan Tulachan
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Reviews of "Don't let the palace of your life crumble"
You're NOT Kidding!
This is Super!
I am keeping it!
Off to the Vault it goessssssssssssss!
The foundation is very Important!
( TAke the time and smell the roses )
This reminds me of a poem I wrote today~ Wow
Warm HuGs,Sheee
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on November 13, 2006
The pictures you evoke are timesless and the refrain gives us a message we all need. Victor
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 13, 2006
Based and settled in Our Father Gods world and hold. This is so powerful yes we need to watch where we also put our faith and in what Rosh. Thank you for this message,
Blessings,
Joselyn
Roshan this is your best to date in my opinion! A brilliant poem of enlightenment, inspired wisdom abounds. Several holy men, besides Jesus, have written similar parables...
This is Super!
I am keeping it!
Off to the Vault it goessssssssssssss!
The foundation is very Important!
( TAke the time and smell the roses )
This reminds me of a poem I wrote today~ Wow
Warm HuGs,Sheee
Blessings,
Joselyn
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