I'm such a picky reader when it comes to poetry, I always want to pick apart somebody's poem because it is either too basic, doesn't rhyme or it just simply isn't poetry... but this... my first reaction was, "Holy crap!"
Absolutely amazing. I'm stunned. The first four-liner that completed itself... and with such a bang.
You need to publish this somewhere. Hallmark?
Stunning.
Beautifully illustrated in verse: you set quite a stormy mood. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
A four petals poetic flower... "A Jealous Sky" bears the scent of beauty.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Well Penned
Peace
William
Chanti
Regis
Beautiful!
Absolutely amazing. I'm stunned. The first four-liner that completed itself... and with such a bang.
You need to publish this somewhere. Hallmark?
Stunning.
good poem... that jealous sky