The sun now is just kissing, the sea…
What a beautiful day…!
Sky’s painted with blues and burgundy’s…
There’s a peacefulness that surrounds…
Whispers from you…!
Only loves found…
I sit by the ocean with a “smile”…
Time is coming…!
There will no longer be miles…
I close my eyes…!
Inhale deeply…
“Scent of flowers”
I can feel you!
I can taste you, kissing me…
I believe that you are so real…!
No longer wishing to open my eyes…
But I must!
The sun has almost left the sky…
I wait…!
In nights in white satin…
In a bed with flowers…!
Only of you…
“Yes, I am smiling…!”
Tide is coming in…
It’s coming in, with you…
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Reviewed by S. Holland (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2002
I really like this because it so accurately conveys the tension of waiting...you want the stress to end, but you would like the beauty of it to go on forever.
Wow! This is weird.
Are we connected in some ways?
This reminds me of my poem "~Waves~"
Are you the one who's been watching the waves with me?
Here are the waves:
<a href="http://www.geocities.com/sandieangel_2000/stories2.html#Waves"> http://www.geocities.com/sandieangel_2000/stories2.html#Waves
Loved your poem a lot!
Sandie Angel :o)
P.S. My poem ~Waves~ was created due to a dream that I had. "A Love Letter To Nameless" was my original dream. The character in the dream was very real, only I have forgotten to ask his name in my dream, so I called him "Nameless".....and ~Waves~ was created as a self-therapy for myself. I go there to watch the waves whenever I feel bad.
Wow! This is weird.
Are we connected in some ways?
This reminds me of my poem "~Waves~"
Are you the one who's been watching the waves with me?
Here are the waves:
http://www.geocities.com/sandieangel_2000/stories2.html#Waves
Oh yes my little fish!! It's coming alright!!
Turn and point south, now start walking (swimming?). I'll tell ya when to stop!! Follow the scent of the flowers to your green-eyed cat!! puurrrrr....
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I love your unique style. Always on the money. Gregg
Are we connected in some ways?
This reminds me of my poem "~Waves~"
Are you the one who's been watching the waves with me?
Here are the waves:
<a href="http://www.geocities.com/sandieangel_2000/stories2.html#Waves"> http://www.geocities.com/sandieangel_2000/stories2.html#Waves
Loved your poem a lot!
Sandie Angel :o)
P.S. My poem ~Waves~ was created due to a dream that I had. "A Love Letter To Nameless" was my original dream. The character in the dream was very real, only I have forgotten to ask his name in my dream, so I called him "Nameless".....and ~Waves~ was created as a self-therapy for myself. I go there to watch the waves whenever I feel bad.
~~SA~~
Are we connected in some ways?
This reminds me of my poem "~Waves~"
Are you the one who's been watching the waves with me?
Here are the waves:
http://www.geocities.com/sandieangel_2000/stories2.html#Waves
Loved your poem a lot!
Sandie Angel :o)
Turn and point south, now start walking (swimming?). I'll tell ya when to stop!! Follow the scent of the flowers to your green-eyed cat!! puurrrrr....
Lady Water Dove *~*~*~*
Very nice...
Now the song
"The Tide Is High" by Blondie is on my mind..
Hugs,
Trixie