Someday time as we know it will stop for each of us.
Copyright 2008, Jerry W. Engler
Whirling in dark linens,
she waltzes through the glazed
and crystalline winter whiteness
over the spaced monolithic stones
of Miller's hundred-foot mound.
And even when
she raises her skirt
in icy morning fog,
the stones refuse to share
their memories of milennia.
Set in three-foot rows,
one-two-three,
one-two-three,
they wait,
the shells of past seas
held tightly in their grips,
for the shadowy, wispy dancers,
in bonnets darkly dancing
against the clear-cast moonlight,
who laid them there to rest.
They wait once more
for spirit world
to dance upon
the deep blackness of earth,
in waltz that takes
her winds away
in full light twirls
of endless mirth,
no clothing,
only creator nudity.
Jerry. Lovely geology here! Is this Stonehenge, or midwestern Indian mounds? You've found a beautiful voice, beautiful poetry. The last line seems awkward to say aloud. Maybe "only the nudity" then "of the creator." ???
A feminine earth spirit......Mother Earth........
didn't the ancients believe in an female creator?
I love the mystical aura here, right up my alley......
so inspiring....a keeper
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This poem has such a magical flow. I wonder if those mounds of ancient monolithic stones exist? If they don't, you have at least created them in my mind. Thank you
Woah, Jerry. Once again, you have taken me by surprise. This is very different than even your very different pieces. Darkly beautiful and stunning. Wow.
The Harvest of Souls Crossover is a story that is exciting, vigorous, and full of suspense about the fight of good and evil in two realms, the light and dark world. The Howdy Family is determined to defeat the world of darkness, led by the seemingly
didn't the ancients believe in an female creator?
I love the mystical aura here, right up my alley......
so inspiring....a keeper
pax
a
Sincerely,
Regino
Regis
Be safe,
Karen
Wow, the IMAGERY! The depth of feeling! Sterling pen--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.