Creator Fire (poem) by Jerry W. Engler on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on November 30, 2008

Thank you for sharing this testimonial of your faith, Jerry. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed on May 13, 2008

An amazing poem, Jerry. I like the structure and excellent use of language. The last line reads like a prayer: "bring us to destiny." Is that how you meant it? And "the blaze within" is a wonderfully unique way to express the human spirit, perhaps? The message I got is to trust God to lead our destiny, whereas humans sometimes try to do it by themselves. I really enjoyed the tone/voice of this poem.

Reviewed by P-M Terry Lamar

Reviewed on May 11, 2008

You said it Jerry!
Good insight. Great Faith!
Terry

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on May 9, 2008

Reading this, a universal blaze of red fire comes to mind. A crucible that Our Lord and Saviour used to shape matter into life. Enjoyed

Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER

Reviewed on May 9, 2008

You have danced the words to his song, his ethereal music, the center of all being and becoming the dance of life directed from that sphere.
Jerry wonderfully wise and poetic enjoyed very deeply thank you, and God Bless You! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 9, 2008

All particulate matter sings out to the Center - if only all of mankind could comprehend these profound words, and hold them sacred.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on May 8, 2008

Very inspirational write as it is through God's guidence we journey forward, well said...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on May 8, 2008

Insightful with vain concerns and wanting God to rush us on to destiny. the poem swirled my emotions around and spit them out. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by Jean Pike

Reviewed on May 8, 2008

humankind dancing ritualistic,
locked in futile struggle,
trapped in vain concerns...
Really powerful stuff, Jerry. Your poetry seems to be
getting deeper and more introspective.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 8, 2008

Beautifully written, Jerry; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 8, 2008

Powerfully written inspired poem, uplifts my spirit!
Thank you!

ET

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 8, 2008

Deeply effecting, effective write, Jerry, beautifully penned - well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on May 8, 2008

Beautiful Jerry ~ I connect completely to these words. There is so much that can be said about the message and wisdom propeling this piece, yet for some things there are no words - only 'feelings.' This is a very moving write.