Money In The Bank (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

Amen...Eileen!
love and peace...Carole

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

You've said it, Eileen. Thanks for the inspiration.

Carmen

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

A very uplifting poem! Beautiful penned,
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

The second stanza, which is also the closing strophe... Unless it makes reference to MAMMON, - the one referred (MISGUIDING) and printed on the dollar bill/coin - I can't see how its imagery can fit in the body of this poem, "Money In The Bank".

Whatever it is or was the intention I think that the author should consider re-setting this poem.

An stimulating, striking, and inspiring composition.

I salute You, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

I like this bank!! A beautiful write, inspirational and uplifting! Thanks, E.T. Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

Good advice, but I fear you are playing to the choir. Don't stop, though.

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

This is another one of "Eileen's devotionals" directed right at me. Thank you so much for these reminders to get out of my zoned-out state of mind.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

An idle mind is the devil's workshop. I didn't say that, just borrowed it.

Ron

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

A beautiful ode to our Lord above!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sandi Schraut

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

this is a psalm of praise Eileen, and so wonderful that it lifts the spirit to read! Sandi

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

Eileen,

Excellent write; as always, a job very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Continue to keep daddy in your prayers; and pray I don't fall anymore (already fell before on the way home from breakfast--I am going to feel it tomorrow---it's icy here; I found it...LOL)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

Eileen,

Beautifully penned tribute to our Creator; He is worthy of all praise. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

There is no time better than now to breathe in all the beauty that surrounds us and to learn to want what we have, giving thanks for it all. Even the difficulties have purpose, it is up to us to either accept them as they seem or to delve deeper and find the true lesson. Giving thanks is very much like money in the bank, you are on spot with that, Eileen.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

Boy this is so correct and wise. Don't wait for tomorrow, do it today.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

Oh dear!! This is such a scream, coming straight from having posted my "penny-pinching" write, Eileen. It was a toss up between that and a very contrasting Faith Walk piece... for some reason I went for the "mean" option! :)) But how much nicer is your attitude of gratitude... and the beauty of it is that it costs us not a penny. Beautiful and serene for that Sunday feeling... which can last EVERY day of the week. Bless you and thank you, Kate xx

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

Even if your deaf and blind
Creator sees what's in your mind

I'm sure He does, Tiger Lily, and I wish many more could see and hear, as you do.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

This is a great investment and asset Eileen, when we focus our thoughts and prayers on the Almighty !
Store your treasures up in heaven, where rust can't corrupt, nor the moth devour !
Love
Peter

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

Inspirational write!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 19, 2006

A good poem for a Sunday, the day to revere the most high...Ed