Sitting on porch steps to watch sunset then suddenly a thunderstorm arose it quickly became dark and misty I took shelter on the covered deck
Sitting there catching hazy glimpses of the lake as the weather permitted my scattered thoughts could not take hold I saw my daydreams getting lost in the storm
I became suspended in a capsule of time everything was animated ,except me I could do nothing but observe
I realized my attention was being diverted to more relevant matters than daydreams there are lessons to be learned from nature
The tall pines were conversing with the wind The rain was speaking to the ground surrounded by the elements I listened I knew to "be still and know that He is God!"
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Reviews of "Twilight Lessons"
Reviewed by S J (Reader)
Reviewed on October 8, 2006
Oh, this is so lovely, Eileen!
A most beautiful poem!
This is outstanding…I really loved the last stanza…
“The tall pines were conversing with the wind
The rain was speaking to the ground
surrounded by the elements I listened
I knew to "be still and know that He is God!"
HE is God and he always lets us know in the beauty of his creation and the stillness of ourselves... This is excellent inspiring Eileen. Beautiful art...........
You have such a divine communion with nature, Eileen, and the ability to combine it with the human element. That is your gift and you use it so well.
Much love,
CJ
Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
Yes, nature can certainly remind us to be still and know God, that is the power of it, it can really set the mind straight! Enjoyed this.
Exquisite creative verse informed and shaped by prophetic sensibility. Those who exercise an inner awareness often do do indeed see and hear and come to know in exceptional ways, even as the storm approaches, rages, and eventually passes. Much gratitude for the sharing,
Aberjhani
The Harvest of Souls Crossover is a story that is exciting, vigorous, and full of suspense about the fight of good and evil in two realms, the light and dark world. The Howdy Family is determined to defeat the world of darkness, led by the seemingly
A most beautiful poem!
Sheila
“The tall pines were conversing with the wind
The rain was speaking to the ground
surrounded by the elements I listened
I knew to "be still and know that He is God!"
Peace,Blessings,
Joselyn
Love Tinka
Love,
Dove
Much love,
CJ
Micke
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
The rain was speaking to the ground"
Two oh so excellent statements that convey that Nature does speak a language all its own...Ed & Rufuz
Aberjhani
A marvellous rendition of faith and nature, that go hand in hand
Twilight is my favorite time, and to see it occur over Lake Tahoe is tremendous..
Kudos to your master craftswoman
Love
Peter