I surrender myself to the spirit of the mountain that beckons me to climb ever higher,and submit to the wind whose voice is the one I desire
As the sun sends its beams to cover me like a halo of sparkling gems,birds in trees chirp their quaint melodies,squirrels join in along with the bees
Heaven surrounds me with a teasing display of its more glorious delights,with wildflowers bursting forth in a rainbow of hues,air floating scents that dispel gloomy views
How can anyone be so foolish to ignore all this,provided with Creator's kiss all things are possible when our spirit is free, knowing we have a friend in deity
etw
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Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2007
Splendorous places, indeed!
I love the sea...but the mountains remain my favorite escape place.
Wonderful poem and photo!
Having just returned from the mountains where I discovered some places and spaces new to me, Eileen, I can so easily relate to their beauty and that marvelous oneness with His creations. Such a pleasure to find this today.
Love,
Taylor
With the spirit of spring in the air, I see so much more uplifting poetry on the board these days and this is certainly one of the very best, Eileen. You draw the reader deep into the solace of nature that revitalizes the spirit and brings us closer to the Creator of it all.
Take care,
Sherry
The more we see, the more we know, the more we appreciate... it's all a gift of revelation, Eileen, which you are gifted to impart through your spirit of worship and reverence. Bless you for this; truly a breath of fresh air which liberates the spirit and soul into the freedoms you illustrate. Hosanna in the highest! :)) K xx
A Paean poemized with visions of of the soul... "Surrender~" sings creative and spiritual beauty.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2007
How can they yet they are Dear Eileen.
"How can anyone be so foolish to ignore
all this,provided with Creator's kiss
all things are possible when our spirit
is free, knowing we have a friend
in deity
"
He knew this in the beginning a generation of lawlessness would come with each generation and tribe in the world. yet still he loves those that are not foolish and know him and are thankful for his kiss of love and eternal life.
This was well expressed and inspiring. Blessed palm Sunday Shalom again I leave with Shalom
Love,Josie
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on April 1, 2007
Simply divine!..Eileen this quite took my breath away and I felt as though I had been given a glimpse through a portal that transcends all we percieve on this mortal coil. Inspiring words indeed dear Lady M. Love as ever, Imp ;)x
Wow this is a most beautiful
Journey this word have inspire my soul
foolish to ignore
provided with Creator's kiss!!
Outstanding a very profound write
great imagery and flow!!
Just felt spirit entered my soul thank you!!
Love And Peace To You Always..Morning Star
The words of SURRENDER fly off the page and through the reader's soul like butterflies of starlight glittering "amens" and "shine on poet." Thank you for this wonderful flight and all the beautiful journeys shared on the wings of your luminous pen.
How can anyone ignore the beauty and how can they destroy it little by little?
The picture is awesome and the poem is an eye opener in tandem. Beauty can be temporary when it is abused.
You go Sis!
Love,
Susan
When two men hit the reset button and decide to go out looking for the good in the world, they not only find it but also a lot more.
P.S. The title is listed on Amazon under Look for Something Good by Robert Drews (not by Robert H. Drews)
GLIMPSE OF AN ANGEL IS NOW AVAILABLE. A PORTION OF ALL SALES WILL GO TO HOSPICE TO THUS ENABLE THEM TO HELP OTHERS WHO ARE SOON TO PASS TO THE OTHER SIDE. NO LONGER AVAILABLE.
These song lyrics and art are tales, tides and twinkling lights - tunes telling stories of warmth and sun, city and sand, paths that lead, and the coins we can keep in the Karma Bank. Spirit's been bypassed for sorrow, dreaming of a better tomorrow .
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I love the sea...but the mountains remain my favorite escape place.
Wonderful poem and photo!
Love,
Taylor
The poem and picture are majestic and inspiring.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Take care,
Sherry
Beautiful, lofty aspiration and inspiration: well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Says it all.
Elizabeth
Be safe,
Karen
Allen
erin
Great pen!
Thanks
Dan
A Paean poemized with visions of of the soul... "Surrender~" sings creative and spiritual beauty.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
"How can anyone be so foolish to ignore
all this,provided with Creator's kiss
all things are possible when our spirit
is free, knowing we have a friend
in deity
"
He knew this in the beginning a generation of lawlessness would come with each generation and tribe in the world. yet still he loves those that are not foolish and know him and are thankful for his kiss of love and eternal life.
This was well expressed and inspiring. Blessed palm Sunday Shalom again I leave with Shalom
Love,Josie
Love Tinka
Journey this word have inspire my soul
foolish to ignore
provided with Creator's kiss!!
Outstanding a very profound write
great imagery and flow!!
Just felt spirit entered my soul thank you!!
Love And Peace To You Always..Morning Star
Wishing you a fantastic National Poetry Month,
Aberjhani
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
The picture is awesome and the poem is an eye opener in tandem. Beauty can be temporary when it is abused.
You go Sis!
Love,
Susan
Carmen
all this,provided with Creator's kiss
A most profound question, especially these sad days, Tiger Lily.
A may those sparkling gems brighten many a day for you.