In the vastness of galactic time I go to find new worlds to rhyme my instinctual knowledge pattern and rare dominant energy system makes me ready to take flight soaring the enchanted indigo night my friendly stargazer flies with me A gift from the spirt of the heavenlies
Sweet celestial mysteries await us scintillating stars dance the stardust cosmic fireflies add color to the scene while fairy and flora flitter in between an abundant kaleidoscope of color in neon shades that outshine each other soon we're in a happy mood feeling bright glad all earths worries are out of sight
Oh what a fabulous bounty we discover in ancient tablets words of poetry lovers "Come my beloved let us go forth to the fields, let us lodge in the villages let us get up early to the vineyards,let us see if the vine has budded,whether the grape blossoms are open,or pomegranates are in bloom; there I will give you my love"
This is a beautiful and thought-provoking write. To me, it speaks to the essence of opening up one's heart and mind to what is around us and enjoying the beauty that surrounds us.
Thank goodness for " " and the notation that this was from the Song of Solomon, or I'd have thought that these were your words - the fit is perfect.
Im with Jerry I am not sure which is yours and which is his
A perfect blend I would suspect
One thing is clear and that is your heart is in the stars
and not the ones you can get a hollywood map to
Very inspiring and rather captivating poem. This is the place Where I lik to live, die and resurrect to live once a gain. Much love and respect to you dear Queen. God bless You
abdi-Noor
Such a beautiful and emotionally moving piece. To soar so high into the heavens in such depth brings out all the wonder and creation that are at hand...
Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by William Cryer (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
Eileen this is awesome; it makes me want to watch Star Trek. Or Star Wars. I forgot the ending in 'Return of the Jedi.' Time for another marathon! Another splendid poem!
You sure do rhyme like an ancient celestial mariner: I guess if you believe in reincarnation that's what you (we) are. I like your cosmic beat followed by pure poetic simplicity. I'm looking forwared to a getting a book of yours. (very musical too in that Indigo Night)
lol michael g.
As a skywatcher myself, I really love this one. Thank you!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
WoW! Eileen, I hardly knew where your words left off and the quote from Solomon began. Actually I wouldn't have known at all if you hadn't correctly quoted it and then pointed it out. That just goes to show me that you do, indeed, write Heavenly poetry . . .
This exceptional book, Celebrating the Gift of Being Alive, has the perfect thoughts and words for birthdays, graduations, engagements, marriages, and any life celebration or family tradition.
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Outstanding!
Doug
Thank goodness for " " and the notation that this was from the Song of Solomon, or I'd have thought that these were your words - the fit is perfect.
Kathy
Newfie Hugs, Rose
I go to find new worlds to rhyme
If anyone can, you can, Tiger Lily.
A perfect blend I would suspect
One thing is clear and that is your heart is in the stars
and not the ones you can get a hollywood map to
abdi-Noor
Be safe,
Karen
love and peace
Huda
Always, Christine
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Walt
I love star gazing in the moonless nights
one can see more stars, in the dark heavens
Peace & love be with you
William
add so much to that beautiful scripture.
Wuve ya!
Love,
annie
Love,
Susan
lol michael g.
As a skywatcher myself, I really love this one. Thank you!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.