One dark and stormy Halloween night The boundary where storms are kept Gave the heavens a fright When the portals were opened To release the makings of a storm There was confusion, and all elements Came through the doors together Making a new kind of weather
Everything became chaos The hail fought with the snow And neither knew where to go Lightning followed the moon And the rain came out with the sun As thunder roared over everyone Noises of pitters, patters bumps and bangs Then out came the wind like a banshee howl Causing the heavenly hosts to growl
It was an incredible culmination typhoons Hurricaines,tornadoes,blizzards All began happening at the same time Causing the universe to lose its mind Could the world possibly end like this All the earth in a quake giving the sky a kiss Putting the world in such pitiful plight One dark and stormy halloween night.
REminds me of that Christmas tune (I didn't get any music yet) but what musical verse. Did you take that pic? You and Karla will have to co-write something soon and we can have the battle of the Storm-Front pictures! Great poem as always.
Eileen, you've capture the storm fantastically with your words, almost made me feel as though I was in the midst of it. The vivid images were described and shown in every line. You've set a scene up for a spooky halloween night...almost makes the hair stand on end. I liked it a lot!
Ed, this is close enaugh, almost December, the music goes welllllllllll with that E.T. but halloween be as good a time, it lends itself to that, nice write,Blessings Jasmin Horst
Oh my, Eileen! With weather like this, I don't know if I want to change my job description. I think I may just burrow down with the prairie dogs!
Love,
annie
It very well could end like that . . . You gave us a mental (even photo, but I like the mental better) and dire warning . . . It not having to be Halloween for this to come about . . .
Could the world possibly end like this
All the earth in a quake giving the sky a kiss
I think it very possibly could. Don't know if it will happen on a Halloween, though. The ancient Mayans believed it will happen in December 2012; and I'm starting to believe them.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 25, 2007
Sounds like a normal night these days...
BTW how you do that, I was just writing on one of your poems, and this one pops up..lol
Tasked by his Goddess to find, relocate, and then quicken, the last three Heart Tree gem-seeds, Vanx the bard, and his motley crew of adventurers, set out to do just that.
Tasked by his Goddess to find, relocate, and then quicken, the last three Heart Tree gem-seeds, Vanx the bard, and his motley crew of adventurers, set out to do just that.
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A good frightful story for halloween or around the campfire.
Kathy
I am glad I put a deadbolt back and front for this years nonsense, and Im keeping my cat inside as usual.
Warm hugs
Ch'erie
Be safe,
Karen
pandemonium ...
Love it, Eileen!
Gina
A true vividness and I felt like I was caught
In that chaotic storm!!
Woooow it was a fantestic write!!
Love Peace and hugssss...Yolie
Christine
Is this a StormSpinner kind of write or what!!!!!!! Excellent display of the battle of the air masses. Well done, my new favorite of yours!!!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Dang, wish I'd written this!!!!!!
Love,
annie
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Paul
All the earth in a quake giving the sky a kiss
I think it very possibly could. Don't know if it will happen on a Halloween, though. The ancient Mayans believed it will happen in December 2012; and I'm starting to believe them.
BTW how you do that, I was just writing on one of your poems, and this one pops up..lol