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No Comparison
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I wrote this poem years ago for a challenge, someone made, but  never posted it. You had  to  write a 10 line poem any genre,using words that rhyme with light for five lines,and  words that rhyme with grace for five lines,finishing with non rhyming words that relate to the theme.

............

can I compare you to the suns,powerful LIGHT
or to the lesser moon, of the NIGHT
perhaps to the stars,that shine so BRIGHT
you appeared,and was called the greatest LIGHT
your purpose was to give us new SIGHT

all who believe in your saving GRACE
will be rewarded in a heavenly PLACE
our frowns turned into a smiling FACE
with a heart full of love for the human RACE
for we now have the Savior's EMBRACE
.............
" but you are a chosen generation,a royal
priesthood,a holy nation,His own special people
that you may proclaim the praises of Him who
called you out of the darkness into His
marvelous LIGHT " 1 Peter 2:9

etw


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 Reviews of "No Comparison"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 26, 2011
inspiring and well written ...

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on February 25, 2011
A marvelous LIGHT indeed. Well done, Eileen.
Always a pleasure,
Carolyn

Reviewed on February 23, 2011
Beautifully inspiring Eileen. Hope you are feeling much better.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on February 22, 2011
You wrote quite well then too. I hope you are doing well, Eileen.
Amor

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on February 20, 2011
As I would expect, Eileen, a winner for you and for us. -gene.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 18, 2011
A marvelous poem, Sis.

PS: Your devilish brother Jersey is now saying that you were in on the huge Family Conspiracy against him. How can you be so evil, yet write poems like this??!!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 17, 2011
Wonderful love of God in poetic verse

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on February 17, 2011
Inspiring, Eileen! You are talented. I bet you are a great chef, too?
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on February 17, 2011
...and you've succeeded very well, Eileen,
very well indeed.
This is fine.

John

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 17, 2011
By embracing the challenge you have quickened our light, Eileen. There is no comparison to living in the truth - it is liberating and totally exhilarating... but that doesn't help you with what Ed M's asking?! Hmmmmmmm!! :)) xx

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on February 17, 2011
Exceptional response to the challenge! Patrick

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 17, 2011
Sometimes a challenge can spur and inspire and this seems to have been the case for you and the resulting poem, Eileen. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 17, 2011
Nicely done.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on February 17, 2011
well done!

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on February 17, 2011
I believe you have met the challenge and then some. Nicely done.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2011
A winner for sure sweet lady..well done indeed...stay safe and well..Hugss

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 17, 2011
This reminded me that, like John, I seldom accept challenges. But recently I did write a poem in response to a challenge and I will post it tomorrow. Thank you for this one, because it is absolutely, one hundred percent, YOU! And that is a good thing.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 17, 2011
I thought this was going to be about the comparison between your two brothers, me being the really special one & he being the nerd, but its still a wonderful write, sis...Jerseeeeeeeey

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on February 17, 2011
Once in a rare while I subject myself to a challenge of perhaps an obscure meter- or complicated rhyme scheme. I think my next post can be one of those.
This is wonderful- you win!
:)

John

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on February 17, 2011
You did an excellent job with this piece, Eileen. You should have entered the challenge.

GOD BLESS YOU
TONY


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