There, against the thalo blue pane'
Backdrop of the night
The effervescent glimmer
Of the stars flourescent light
The Orb, in all its glory
The fullness, shining bright
Like a perfect pearl, it radiates
Illuminescent, white
I stand beneath it, naked
To bathe within its glow
Reaching 'cross the miles of which
It lights the night sky, so
Washed beneath its beaming
Caught in the undertow
Captured by its brilliance
Baptized in indigo
And in that moment, waxing
Enveloped, comfort lends
The knowledge of connection
Bridge the distance, it trancends
For 'neath the moon we're standing
Both lovers hearts, and friends
Bathed within the same white orb
Proximity, closer, lends
And so I whisper out your name
Lightly on the breeze
Cocooned within a kiss, it wings
Beyond the rustling trees
Harboured in the moonglow
As it orbs its way to tease
The heart that stands beneath the light
Hands across, forever clasped, we feel at ease
So, naked, I embrace
The essence of our love
Entwined within the brilliant orb
That lifts us high above
Where whispered songs, ethereal
Are locked in ardours trove
Beyond the mortal bound'ries, fly
Into the Orb of love
*i was so captivated by the brilliance of the full moon..and the realization, that you were seeing the same moon as i...it was a feeling of total connection..peace...and ofcourse, love......k
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Reviews of "Orb"
Reviewed by Sharon Williamson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2002
Krissy,
This is beautiful
I hope you are doing well.
Great write my friend,
Sharon;)
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 2, 2002
Beautiful work. ~E
Reviewed by Gregory Sonn (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2002
Hi Sweety,
This is superior work Krissy! Absolutely wonderful. Thalo blue and baptized in indigo were marvelous! Bravo! Gregg
How can the moon help but smile on such a wondrous offering...You enchanted all with this one Krisie...
Reviewed by michael
Reviewed on April 30, 2002
makes me wanna go out and moon tan...
~~michael~~
Reviewed by Trixie Love
Reviewed on April 30, 2002
G'morning Krissy,
I love this write....
Many nights i look
up to universe through
my telescope..
I get such a warm beautiful sense of peace...
As i wonder what is waiting for us on the
other side....
Beautiful write...
Hugs,
Trixie
Reviewed by Dark Stranger (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2002
ms krissy
you did dance the moon well
watched is smile there
as it looked upon your words
Lovely, lovely poem. I remember when Alan lived in Va. and I in Tx. and we shared a particular moon via the telephone. :)
Blessings, Janet xoxoxo
Reviewed by Tomas Teoma Ughdair
Reviewed on April 30, 2002
hi Krissy,
Your supposed to resting,
not Prancing around naked in the moonlight, it must be very warm there,its still a bit chilly here for that sort of thing.
But your right the moon was lovely,think it was smiling for you.
Morchuis,
ps 5-30 am is not resting.
This is beautiful
I hope you are doing well.
Great write my friend,
Sharon;)
This is superior work Krissy! Absolutely wonderful. Thalo blue and baptized in indigo were marvelous! Bravo! Gregg
~~michael~~
I love this write....
Many nights i look
up to universe through
my telescope..
I get such a warm beautiful sense of peace...
As i wonder what is waiting for us on the
other side....
Beautiful write...
Hugs,
Trixie
you did dance the moon well
watched is smile there
as it looked upon your words
Blessings, Janet xoxoxo
Your supposed to resting,
not Prancing around naked in the moonlight, it must be very warm there,its still a bit chilly here for that sort of thing.
But your right the moon was lovely,think it was smiling for you.
Morchuis,
ps 5-30 am is not resting.