*even in bleak moments, the heart smiles, when there is love in it....aml..k
As the spring breeze caresses
And carries me away
To distant places in my mind
Where heart resolves to stay
~**~
Beyond the limitations
That this life heaps upon
The strands so fragile, broken
Tethers lightly til it's gone
~**~
The times of yesterday are passed
Tomorrow, yet unseen
Only in this moment
Are the gifts we share and glean
~**~
We hope for more such moments
Expecting there will be
The future that is looked to
Beyond eternity
~**~
But we're only given snippets
One moment at a time
To do the best within us
Extolling loves own paradigm
~**~
And if these moments pass us
With tomorrow out of reach
Like whispers on a zephyr
To your heart, I beseech
~**~
That all that we have tasted
Of loves own pleasing fare
Embrace the wind and listen
For my loves own song be there
~**~
I love the flow, the rhythm and rhyme!
Wonderful write!
Dee
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
Krissy, I am sure he will listen and hear you "Embracing The Wind" from faraway, and his heart will be there with you when you least expect it. Be alive as you are and keep your spirits high. Bill
Loved this. At first I thought it was going to be about a never-ending love. But it turned out to be a little more realistic. Love in all its frailties.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
Krissy, this is so excellent
":That all that we have tasted
Of loves own pleasing fare
Embrace the wind and listen
For my loves own song be there "
Peggy
Reviewed by Tiana
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
"The times of yesterday are passed
Tomorrow, yet unseen
Only in this moment
Are the gifts we share and glean" Got me real good sweetie! Beautiful write. Hope all is well with you, dear friend. Miss ya tons - Tee
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
You know how to sing!
Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2003
This is a really great write! Very poinant and beautiful! Good job with this one!
- J -
... A true expression of inner vision of an expirienced heart; described by a poet that poemizes with emotions and poetizes with words from the soul. "Embracing The Wind" is the poem.
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Wonderful write!
Dee
":That all that we have tasted
Of loves own pleasing fare
Embrace the wind and listen
For my loves own song be there "
Peggy
Tomorrow, yet unseen
Only in this moment
Are the gifts we share and glean" Got me real good sweetie! Beautiful write. Hope all is well with you, dear friend. Miss ya tons - Tee
- J -
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
I Salute the Author of "Embracing The Wind".
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU