Peridot Eyes Part 2 (poem) by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 13, 2012

Lovely as always my Dear Friend..........GOD BLESS YOU and YOURS............Tony

Reviewed on October 11, 2012

darkness molds the mysteries of imaginations and colors them with bated anticipation and lust - 'Peridot Eyed' know the paths seeded
with deception - and your last line is surely a truthful outcome in
the majority of her encounters, " now you are warned so what will you do; go home with me tonight or I with you" - spell bounding and bewitching Belle - black and exciting are the colors of your ink -- I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger

Reviewed on October 3, 2012

Lady La Belle ~
Twilight of music enchanting the dream or a twist of the
music box. Mystic full moon do tell.

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on October 2, 2012

Taunting for the Tattle
*La Belle* as only You
can Spellbind with class..

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on October 2, 2012

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on October 2, 2012

Certainly, a wicked affair is in the night air.

Ron

Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley

Reviewed on October 2, 2012

What a phenomenal write La Belle
I can't add much more than the others
already have...

"�No, My Sweet, you are an angelic dream
my soul has searched for high and low�
�Sir, dreams are not always as they seem
I give you fair warning and now you know
If I am indeed your dream, take me home�

Fair warning yes? :)

Wonderful

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on October 1, 2012

"..."Be cautious, Sir, Twilight has a dark side...""

Belle, you've given this femme fatale the perfect name..
ah, to meet a Twilight! only in my dreams

john

Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams

Reviewed on October 1, 2012

You are a spinner of tales through poetry. You keep the reader hooked, delightfully, to find out what sinister thing Twilight might do or be. Good work! Be well, Kathy

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on October 1, 2012

Hot and getting hotter...........

Deborah

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on October 1, 2012

A little heat within this write, beautiful.

Rose

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on October 1, 2012

Hmmm i like the way this is shaping up...3?
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on October 1, 2012

. . . and the saga grows. The plot thickens. Naivety and the dark are poised to find themselves on a roller-coaster ride to be all roller-coaster rides. Let 'er rip!

Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks

Reviewed on October 1, 2012

You have the knack to combine the senuous and the "twilight" and with just a hint of danger.
Nice combination!