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Like Ocean Spray
by Randall Davis Barfield → (All Poetry by Randall Davis Barfield)
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Her hand lingered just a bit
When it shook mine
In her face I looked for a sign
There was none
But there was something
Or some things, not sure which
I was her type
Still think that
She was mine, too
In many ways though tall
I loved her taste
In clothes, flat shoes, jewelry
She was always pleasant, fresh
Like ocean spray in June
And the way she moved about
Reminded me of the golden leaves
Caught up every year
In those autumn dust devils
Kids like so much
Too bad we moved away
And I lost track of her
Just never went back

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 Reviews of "Like Ocean Spray"
Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on April 14, 2008
What a romance it might have been...your paths may cross again...if it was meant to be

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 14, 2008
Wonderful remembrance of a time that left its mark on you!...ET

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on April 14, 2008
Good poem and liked it. Sorry it did not turn out good for you but don't give up hope. Love is still around for you somewhere.

Reviewed on April 14, 2008
That you would write this poem of remembrance for her, tells she impressed you more than you first thought. These lines:
"She was always pleasant, fresh
Like ocean spray in June"

beautiful expressions, Randall.
Micke

Reviewed on April 14, 2008
You had me spellbound! Beautiful nostalgic pen.

Reviewed on April 14, 2008
Poignant memories linger like salt in the air from ocean water - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on April 14, 2008
I'm sure she would love this write of her. Hey with the computer, you can find anyone, if you want to. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 14, 2008
sad to loose track of a friend but beautiful to remember her so

Reviewed on April 14, 2008
Beautiful write with a hint of melancholy; very well penned, Randall! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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