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Like A Story
by Randall Davis Barfield → (All Poetry by Randall Davis Barfield)
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She’d said no
But he didn’t stop
Everything had been in place
Like a story almost
Full Miami moon, palm fronds
Swaying gently in the breeze
Blowing from the south where small
But lovely Key West lay
That perfect March temperature
Which is neither warm nor cool but
Deliciously makes one’s skin
Breathe, maybe smile
Freshly mowed grass in the public
Park with stones painted white
The awesome sound of waves
God’s rhythm
Hitting the sandy beach that night
About half a block from where they’d
Made love in the car
Not for the first time
Her soft body desiring what her voice
Had said it didn’t
They’d married in the terrible heat
Of August
Welcomed a baby son into the world
That December
Proud parents they had become
The son would one day achieve fame in sports
Alongside his many colleagues whose
Last names were Aaron, Campanella,
Cobb, Gehrig, Mantle, and Robinson—
Just to name a few.

 


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 Reviews of "Like A Story"
Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on April 17, 2008
Beautiful view--beautiful lives--beautiful write. --Charlie

Reviewed on April 17, 2008
What a great story!!! This has a good ending!!!

Sandie May :o)

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 16, 2008
I have always known you are quite the romantic. Your passionate, beautifully penned poem confirms it. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on April 15, 2008
...you pen this story of reality well...and with images...everything seems to be in place...yet a hint of what would one day be...might not somehow...become the hopes they truly wished for.
very well written Randall...
John

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 15, 2008
Beautiful and very moving and yet between the lines there is a hint of more yet to come....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on April 15, 2008
It is a story...a very poetic story that reads of success in life. Home run with this, Randall.
Micke

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on April 15, 2008
Great poem and made me think of my daughter's friend who moved to Florida to be with her boyfriend who was a former pro football player and from her home town. she is very happy down there and the first time my husband went on Guard duty to Florida for summer camp he phoned me and said you would not believe the beauty of the palm trees down there and I got to see them with 2nd husband when he took me on a cruise and we left from Miami. they are truly in a bautiful state down there for all to eventually see.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on April 15, 2008
I agree with Karla about the imagry...and was left with the feeling that there is much more to this story.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed on April 15, 2008
Beautifully imaged, so much so, you took us in the middle of the story - well done, Randall.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on April 15, 2008
What a beautiful story!!! I love it....

Reviewed on April 15, 2008
Delightful story you tell in verse, Randall; very well penned! LOVED it!! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on April 15, 2008
Oh you were definately hit with the spring bug. Great write, thanks for the memories. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 14, 2008
Randall, you are in a romantic zone,sharing some lovely moments that we all hopefully can remember,of our own, with delight...Thanks for sharing!

ET

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 14, 2008
well written there are many stories such as this, and so many can relate--you told it very well


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