I merely hold the scalpel ... as the
glimmering blade makes sweet
love to your flesh.
Deep red bubbles up to the surface
as it glides smoothy, effortlessly,
producing plumes of tender red
hearts that bleed so brilliantly
like blooming roses.
Let me pull back the flesh and
inspect what lies beneath ...
Organs and sinew, muscle,
intestine and the stomach
but what I search for I cannot
find ... for that I need to
split open the ribcage.
Ahh, there is my saw!
I want to peel back each rib until
it snaps, breaking off in my hand
like a wishbone.
... the saw clanks upon the floor ...
Just like making a meatloaf, I plunge
my hands deep within your body
and let my fingers root around, probing
every little red inch. The blood is
still warm ... and I giggle like a child
with a new toy.
Then the urge hits me ... the brain!
Is it grey, or is it pink! I must find out!
Cool imagery. I would have liked to see less exclamation and just plain, short, cutting sentences to heighten the intensity even more in the poem. All in all, good work.
Nice, makes me even more frightened of the hospital. Good and gory. My kinda stuff.
Reviewed by Johnny Smith (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2007
The making of a true Gein.
Reviewed by Adam Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2003
Reminds me of a band called Carcass. They write about surgery and disease and gore in general. This is exquisitely morbid. I just love it. Also, some good line breaks. If you say each line in one breath you end up breathing quite fast. This lends a feeling of excitement, frenzy even. Very good.
The Butcher's Boy
- 2011 Readers Favorite Award Silver Medal Winner in Horror - Fiction
A Paranormal/Chiller by Michael Robb
Thirty-one years ago, Buxly the Butcher went to trial for killing h
Grab those side-irons, saddle up and join former Civil War sharpshooter Luther Henry for a ride into pure terror, western-style…think ‘Wild Wild West’ meets ‘The X-Files’.
Adam
What happen to dolls and easy-bake ovens?
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