Gone, Gone, Gone (poem) by D L Johnson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 27, 2007

hay wait come back and get me!!!
enjoyed

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)

Reviewed on May 26, 2007

Dear Dan --

Gone Gone Gone -- yup - so much of it. All the verses are great but this one grabbed me - like a first stanza should.

Standing in the middle of the street
Minds spinning one hundred
miles per hour
But I cannot...move my lifeless feet…

Kathy

Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.

Reviewed on May 23, 2007

I hear music (as in an old Eagles tune) as I feel the rhythm of your words Dan......Excellent lyrics my friend.

Peace,

Bill

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 23, 2007

So, I’m gone, gone, gone
Like a bird on it’s wing
Like a song I’ve got to sing
I’m gone now,
And I cannot wait to go.

I know the feeling well!

Reviewed by Theresa curnow (Reader)

Reviewed on May 23, 2007

This is lovely Dan. Again, another great poem that you could put music too. Good write, love, Theresa.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 23, 2007

One tries a yesterday fovorite T-shirt and discover that not using them causes them to shrink several numbers in the drawer.
A fifty years younger sweet thing still arouses us and we find out that, after all, we aren't so gone, gone, gone.
A demented poem from a sane poet, or it is the other way around?
Great.
Georg

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

A really Kool write Dan
Peace

William

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

I liked this one...very lyrical. Good job.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

Dan,

You've outbested yourself here in engaging, thought provoking lines; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 22, 2007

I think that is called poetic insanity.....lol!!

Love Tinka