Quiet Dawn- Cinquain (poem) by D L Johnson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 29, 2009

Quite beautiful my friend.......and the photo is a perfect match to invoke such lovely imagery......

Peace,
Bill :-)

Reviewed on October 8, 2009

I love the photo and have never read a better cinquain! I taught the form for years hoping to strike gold in a student's imagination. This is a blessing!

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on October 1, 2009

You have written so beautifully of my favorite time of day!

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on September 17, 2009

Oh my...very beautiful writing sweet man...stay safe and well..Hugss

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on September 5, 2009

Stunning beauty in so few perfect words Dan.

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on September 5, 2009

a mind in tune with the majesty of dawn -- the moment of reincarnation for day after its respite -- an elegant view my friend -- peace and love -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on August 29, 2009

A beautiful moment.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on August 29, 2009

Let us get lost in this lovely poetic visual
but take me furter into this glorious canvas of day break "Quiet Dawn-Cinquain" for your eyes to feast upon!
Absolutely BEEE....U....TEEE...Ful!!
Cinquain style of poetry is so fun to get lost in :)
Peace & Blessings
Vickie

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on August 28, 2009

You have shown in this lovely cinquain how few words can capture the most beautiful of moments... well done TD!!!

Smiles, SPP

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler

Reviewed on August 27, 2009

I am liking this style. Thank you for sharing. J'nia

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on August 27, 2009

Absolute!
This is so complete!
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by David Hightower

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

Dan - I could smell the freshness of the air of the morning, all the clearer after the storm. - David

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on August 25, 2009

Dan, you selected precisely the right poetic form
to capture this "beathtaking" sunrise. Thanks for
sharing. -gene.

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on August 23, 2009

Dan,
My favourite time of day, especially when it comes the way you see it; well and truly captured. Yes!

John

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors

Reviewed on August 22, 2009

Reminds me of some mornings at Tahoe. Refreshing indeed. Now I have to do some research to find out what a Cinquain is. Thanks Patrick

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on August 22, 2009

How beautiful are both the photo and the words. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 22, 2009

WELL DONE...VERY GOOD IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

vivid capture ... nice!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Hobbs (Reader)

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

Hi D.L.
You captured the calm of the hour beautifully. Thank you. Liz

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

Beautiful Cinquain and photo Dan! Creates a lovely mood!...ET

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

I used to teach my students in middle school about different forms of poetry including the cinquain. Nicely done, Dan. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by George Thompson

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

You've expressed the feelings I had this morning after a night shift of work. Great words, great write!

George

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

D.L.

You've describe the best time of the day with your short, sweet words.

Mary

Reviewed by Ray { The Great Canadian Buzzard }

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

Enjoyed the write, nice picture too
Have a great day
The Buzzard

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 21, 2009

Love the pic and the poem