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Haiku 2-27-08
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I just realized something. Today is my one year anniversay at AD, and I am so surprised at the response that I've had to my postings. Thanks to all! dlj

Haiku 2-27-08

© 2008

Dan Johnson

 

I pass on the street,

Looking at your open toes

and delicate feet.

 

You walk right on by,

This time I see the pale blue,

of your lovely eyes.

 

I want to see more

of you, you say, when day turns

to night, turn left,  go

 

one block look for the

light up my life hold me tight

we’ll share mornings light.

 

Dan Johnson

© 2008

 

 
 
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 Reviews of "Haiku 2-27-08"
Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on March 13, 2008
I see you do quite a bit of this from - in bunches too. I like the way they are interlaced and relate to the ongoing theme.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 29, 2008
Delightful offering!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
Delightfully beautiful and shared with a smile....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
Dan...this good...very good...a beautiful chain of of haiku/senryu that gives snapshots of a relationship, whether real or imaginary...Excellent work here.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
Happy Anniversary, Dan, and quite the 'Kus!
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 28, 2008
You walk, she goes pass you, you turn around your head to look, and you kiss the lamppost for no looking where you go.
I hope she worth it.

Georg
Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
clever transition from the 3rd to last stanzas.

Congrats on your 1 year
Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
Dan - A winning ku in any league! It's good to know that you're a girl watcher with honors. There are only a few things in our world that are better. ... some much better. Watchful, - Bill
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
A romantic ku fest, how nice, thank you Dan!;-)
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
Beautifully imaged, Dan - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on February 27, 2008
From open toes to eyes, eh? I really did like this and loved the 'light up my life' line..

Always,
Myrna
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