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What's it going to take-Revised 2008
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With the price of petrol and food going up, I thought it would be appropriate to revise something I wrote way back in 2007-dlj

What’s it going to take? Revised 2008
(To feed my car)
© 2007 2008
Dan Johnson

My needs are few,
Roof over my head,
Food in my belly
to keep me fed
And gas in my car,
Truth is…I
ain’t going far,
(at these prices, who can?)

I went to the grocery to see what I use
to be able to afford,
A trip down aisle 3 interrupted, to the check-out lane,
by the clerk-asking if, I wanted “paper or plastic?”
Pulled out my canvass bag and said
“load’em up” …all three items.
I bought a power ball ticket, (I put the ticket in my lucky pocket…)
a loaf of bread,
discounted meat,
and pork and beans

Paid $3.69 a gallon just today,
Price is going up tomorrow,
more I surely don’t want to pay.
I know others pay much more for petrol, true ,
nevertheless, others aren’t I, and I’m not you.
Times are getting mean,
trimming back as far as I can,
All I need is affordable gasoline…
At today’s rate for me to putt-putt along
my best bet would be another can of pork and beans.

Ain’t life a gas?
Dan Johnson
© 2008
 

 


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Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on May 13, 2008
Don't like these prices either, who does? But you still see one person in a car going to their jobs? Where is car pooling? Food is expensive too and have cut out many desseerts and unnecessary things. Beans are good for you though. Good write for all to ponder.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on May 8, 2008
Two years ago a new Congress promised us they were going to make things better! Gas prices have doubled, food is up twenty percent, taxes are up and we, the people are down! Let's throw them out and start all over again! Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2008
Dear Dan,

Let's hope life is not a gas these days. Smelly, pricey slop. Remember waiting on gas lines in the 70's with the shortage. I thought that was bad.

Great poem.

hugs,
Kathy

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 5, 2008
And oddly enough, many want 4-8 more years of the same. Go Figure! And life truly is a gas these days.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 5, 2008
Dan, I propose rickshaws for everybody pulled by any politician near you to where your fancy wants to go (whip = optional)
To reduce prices? that's simple, ALL politician should get paid minimum wages (you will see them low-wages raising like Nasa rockets)
and make all the oil companies a USA property and boot all the blood suckers that make "the American dream" by "their American way" (and as you are at it, squeeze the Bahamians to spit the scret accounts of those "priviliged tycoons" cheating the rest of us of tax money.
Just a thought...

Georg

Reviewed by F. William Broome
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
I like this, Dan. Now, I've got a plan, but you are too far away to be included... so you're lucky; I'm inviting myself for lunch with everyone I know... Jim tomorrow, Joe, the next day, Jan, the next, and so on and so filled with Bill. That way, I won't have to buy grub but for the weekend. Clever, huh?
"Hello. Hey there, Marge. What? You want to come and eat lunch with me, today? Okay. I'm free today, but busy the rest of the week." - Bill

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
Really good one, Dan! You know, the greenies want to talk about how the Brazilians are doing quite fine using ethenol, but they neglect to mention that only one out of twenty-three Brazilian families own a car, and they do not drive 50 to 60 miles round-trip to work. I am as Green as they come, but we do not have the bio-mass per capita to make an ethenol solution work, and no one is going to pay a five-digit pricetag for a new ethenol-burning car. Moving close to work, plus using a bike, might work. Motor-bikes are very popular in China. Hmmm ...

Ted

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
You said it well Dan! I'm using public transportation!
Soon I'll be buying powdered milk, it's ridiculous!

ET

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
Well Dan I am with you all the way as prices continue to rise. We just checked out the cost of our gas here in Ottawa, Canada and it is $1.20 a Liter or $4.50 a gallon so people don't have to wonder why I keep the car parked and as for the cost of food, back many years ago when we had five growing kids at home our groceries cost about $150.00 a pay and now with just one at home our bill runs to about $300.00 a pay. So I will wait for Ed to let us in on some secrets.lol.

Thanks for sharing Dan,
Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
I cringe and I'm not even the gas-pumper..LOL My kid works two jobs to make sure he can commute to school.. That is so sad to me! Being from an oil producing and refining state doesn't lessen the cringe either...lol

Just 'buzzin' by... (couldn't resist..LOL)
Myrna

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
We seem to be in the same, kind of, thought ballpark today...when I find out how to lower the prices, I will let you know...till then, as they say, "Grin & Bear it"...;) Ed

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
My kids bike is looking quite tempting too. Enjoyed

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
...your words take us everywhere...our car might not these days Dan.
very well said...
John

Reviewed on May 4, 2008
And we thought prices were bad then - holysmokes! How things have changed - and not for the better...and the problem is, paychecks are worth less nowadays - excellent pen, Dan.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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