Wrong house, right love (poem) by D L Johnson on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Reviewed on June 22, 2008

Wonderful write; enjoyed the creativity and unique approach as well as the subject. I can hear your words sung through a sad, raspy voiced country singer with a tender heart.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on June 21, 2008

Heartbreaking, sad and romantic. This Dan, is absolutely beautiful, mkaes me wonna cry.....

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on June 21, 2008

Dan, I don't know much about country music (my nephew swears
by it), but I do know good writing when I read it. And this
is a beautifully written poem.

Aside: I also have written and had published a lot of haiku,
and it's an art form I enjoy - but sadly, I've gotten away
from it. Yours I like. - gene.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 15, 2008

A sad song that expresses a common theme in this world/life. Thank you, Dan. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)

Reviewed on May 31, 2008

Hey Dan -

very country indeed. I couldn't make the picture appear, but it's fun imagining it. The twang carries on.

love,
Kathy

Reviewed by David Hightower

Reviewed on May 29, 2008

Dan - Like the play on words in the title and in the poem. Country, yes, but I can hear some blues there, too. - David

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 29, 2008

Wow! This would surely be a hit,not only at the Rhyman,but everywhere,Dan!Hope you get it published! ET

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on May 28, 2008

Wonderful, lyrical poem my friend...it does have a country ring to it...I could almost see Tammy and George singing this one, or Conway and Loretta...enjoyed this much!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on May 28, 2008

Great writing sweet man...please have a wonderful and safe day..Hugsss

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on May 28, 2008

Definitely a country flavor to this one.. I think you should tune it up and send it out myself...yep I do..)
Smiles,
Myrna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 28, 2008

Definitely sounds like a country song to me!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on May 28, 2008

...and there are those that are much in love for the right one for the reasons but on the wrong time of a wrong house...

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

The toss of the dice or the flip of a coin, life can sometimes play cruel jokes, how sad....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

A shame sometimes how life works out, to love the right person at the wrong time HURTS. Thank you for sharing a great write Dan.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

Penned so well to a Country rhythm, the eternal triangle. Great poem my friend. God bless. JMW

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

Quite a dilemma this is..Sometimes there is no right or wrong...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

Being a woman I cannot say too much. But this is a good write and your intentions are good so stay in the house where you are and just remember that good times. Embarrassing this write is kind of to me.

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

The poetry of Nashville never changes. Your words flow as if they are being lived in the moment. Ain't it agonizing to live the agony of one living with one while loving another? An old one - with new words. - Bill

Reviewed by George Thompson

Reviewed on May 27, 2008

Agonizing, isn't it? Right when we think we're over things, something comes up that leaves a reminder of those lovely times together.

George