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Poetry Girl - Part 1
by D L Johnson → (All Poetry by D L Johnson)
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Poetry Girl
Part 1
Dan Johnson
© 2008

Oh, there you go
Spinning my head in
A dizzy whirl,
Now I’m Hoping, praying,
That all this turning,
Twisting, flipping
Will take me to the heart
And soul of the poetry girl.

Your sweet flowing words
Is a dance in my lovesick head.
Feeling passion grow
is a
Gourmet meal on which
I’m fed the love
Of the poetry girl.

Your verse, smooth as silk
And filled with romantic taunts,
Keeps me close to you,
Yes!
You are the poetry girl,

Senses drive hard
I have not felt this way since
I cannot tell you when.
But this I know,
You are my poetry girl.

Dan Johnson
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 Reviews of "Poetry Girl - Part 1"
Reviewed by S Phillips
Reviewed on October 11, 2008
I love this poem! Truly feel-good for this woman!
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 30, 2008
Beautifully twirly and feel-goody, Dan! I like this jive-writing - kinda reminds me of an upbeat and pulsing Cinnamon Girl from Neil Young and has all the mystery and fascination of "how many angels dance upon a pinhead" kinda thing... Goodness knows what my Earl Grey Tea has got in it this afternoon... Perhaps I'm just swayed, too, by all the kittenish inquisitiveness in comment beneath me, too! Carefree and full of joie de vivre. C'est la passion de la poesie! Many of us are bitten that way! :)) xx
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 26, 2008
I know a "poetry girl" or two and they never have to write a single word to express exquisite feminine poetry. Thanks for sharing, Dan. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on September 23, 2008
Wonderful flow and tribute to your muse. -- Jeff
Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on September 22, 2008
:) this is very sweet :)
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on September 21, 2008
many names come to mind Dan -- will part two reveal a name ? -- there is a bit of mystery involved here -- coupled with speculation of course -- JMW
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
A delight that prompts me to wonder what the second
part will reveal!;-) Beautifully done, Dan!...ET
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
Oh my....this is lovely sweet man...be well and always safe ..Hugsss,much love too you xoxo
Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
Great inspiration. Don't let it get away.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
Whoever she is, she has truly inspired you!
Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
Dear Dan, that fishing Love got you to swallow hook, sinker and even the spinner!
Who said that romance was dead?...hmm!...me?

Georg
Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on September 19, 2008
Dan, this is wonderfully romantic, and I have my eyes on BOTH of you. Neither could do better in the eyes of this old poet, and here's my vote for more and more of the same. - Bill
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 18, 2008
Awwwww, how sweet you are and such a gentle soul....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by David Delaney
Reviewed on September 18, 2008
Wonderful writing & flow here Dan, for a moment there I thought you were talking about my darling wife.:)

Dave.
Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on September 18, 2008
Okay I want details...you hear me? LOL.. DETAILS!! Great piece though hon...really loved the playful flow of this.. wonderful stuff!

hugs and smiles,
Myrna
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on September 18, 2008
Dan,

Ah, phoo. With all the spinning/twirling/turning/twisting/flipping, thought the poetry girl you were penning was the StormSpinner. LOL (Just kidding) Any girl would be honored to have a poem written about them by you. You're terrific!! Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 18, 2008
Sweet poetry!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on September 18, 2008
This poem dances well. The rhythm and flow are nicely combined. Great job, Dan.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on September 18, 2008
Dan, This is so sweet, such a mystery, you and your poetry girl..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on September 18, 2008
And you my cuz are her poetry boy. What a beautiful flowing write. Well penned and unique. Loved this, Love, Bonnie
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