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Where did Jerry Go?
by D L Johnson → (All Poetry by D L Johnson)
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My cousin was in Viet Nam for one day, they sent him home, but not the way they took him, back when he was a Green Beret-dlj

Where did Jerry Go?
© 2008
Dan Johnson

Where did Jerry go?
He said he would be right back,
but, isn’t that what they all say?
I haven’t seen him since 1962,

Jerry’s Mom called my Mom
they were sisters-in-law.
She told my Mom that Jerry had
enlisted in the Army and qualified,
after all their extensive training,
that Jerry was going to be a Green Beret.

We all saw the picture of Jerry standing
in full dress uniform, saluting, smiling and
wearing that prestigious Green Beret.

Only the best would earn such recognition,
So off they went to rice fields, and burning fields,
and thousands of young soldiers were the body bag yield.

Jerry’s Mom called my Mom and said
That Jerry came home “Thank God” except
for the metal shrapnel in his head.

25 years later:
Jerry’s Mom called my Mom,
They were sisters-in-law,
To talk about the things that Jerry could do.
“He can now tie his shoes,
dress himself, and oh yes,
multiply by his 2’s,
what else can I say, other than?
Jerry was once a Green Beret, just look at him now.”

Where did Jerry go?
He said he’d be right back,
But, isn’t that what they all say?
I have not seen him since 1962,

Dan Johnson
© 2008

 


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 Reviews of "Where did Jerry Go?"
Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
I know of this all to well, my friend. It isn't shrapnel in my head, but images that can never be erased.

~W~

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on November 16, 2008
pretty good poem and touching about the war I watched on TV when a kid. He served in honor, but I've always felt when watching war videos it would be better to die in action than be wounded. I wonder how he really feels inside? A good one for Vet's Day.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 13, 2008
A very moving write Dan. Holly

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on November 11, 2008
good to read this one again Dan - it certainly is a very moving story, very well told.

Reviewed by Butch Howard (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2008
This is a sad and touching commentary about an ugly time in our history and a young man who paid a heavy price. Although sometimes necessary, there is no glory in war. Good job putting such tragedy into words.
~Butch

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2008
Excellent writing sweet man...as always enjoyed so very much...stay safe and well...Hugsssss

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on October 22, 2008
For very personal reasons, this piece touched me to the core.
So many of us went into that war...all of us, who came back, did so changed forever...some of us, forty years later are still trying to find what we lost. While we function well in most cases and outwardly appear unscathed, inside, there is a hole, an abyss, a missing piece that cannot be found or filled. Outstanding piece of work here.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 20, 2008
Dan, an outstanding poem that grips the reader start to finish.
One that I will remember and ponder! Superbly written!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 19, 2008
An outstanding write Dan
Poor Jerry's body came back
But I guess he left his mind back there
where he will never return
A Heartfelt Piece Dan
Peace be with you and Jerry

William

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on October 19, 2008
Sometimes we read words that leave us changed.. this is one of those pieces. My cousin (who was my hero in many way) came home so changed and I read this I wonder too all over again 'Where did Doug go...' Thank you Dan.. for your tremendous words and your friendship.

Hugs, Myrna

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 19, 2008
Know too many of those, the only consolation, if there can be one, is that the ones I know were Marines, and I still live with the illusion and conviction that the Marines Corps will never left one of its own behind.
Semper Fi

Georg


Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2008
Dan, you have always cut to the chase in your poems, and this one hits the target dead center. Nam was down and dirty, and so is Iraq. So is any war. My grandfather did both World Wars, and he never got over being a cringing shell-shocked mess. Years ago, I did a research paper on the homeless in southern California, and I found that too many of them were Vietnam vets with crippled minds. Though it remains below the public radar, we are seeing the same wreckage being brought back home from Iraq. They have all gone where Jerry went. Bless you for writing this one!!!

Ted

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 18, 2008
Jerry is a walking miracle Dan. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Mildred Kisor (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2008
Dan, it seems that Nam is now in review in Iraq where I have one that has been deployed 3 times and every day I praise God for his safety. He has 3 babies. Your words surely come home to me in your poem Where Did Jerry Go. You have surely expressed what is wrapped around all our hearts. Thank you for sharing. Mildred

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 18, 2008
Hard read, when one remembers other Green Beret' they have known from that era...ed

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 18, 2008
This is so well written, Dan. As we've experienced and otherwise
learned it, there are no winners in war. We can always wish for
that miracle for Jerry. =gene.

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on October 18, 2008
Dan, this poem is so damn honest and poignant. So many Jerrys came home like your Jerry...makes you wonder. Is it better for those Jerrys to come home in a body bag or the way your Jerry came home?
What an indictment of our insane world.

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on October 18, 2008
Dan - A powerful poem. Liked the way you contrasted "the very best" with:

“He can now tie his shoes,
dress himself, and oh yes,
multiply by his 2’s..."

Also especially liked:

Only the best would earn such recognition,
So off they went to rice fields, and burning fields,
and thousands of young soldiers were the body bag yield.

I had five cousins, along with myself, in the army during Vietnam so this poem definitely struck a chord. One came back in a body bag. The other two who went to Vietnam came back unwounded but utterly changed. I wrote a poem about one of them that I'll post. - David


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