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Mary
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I know a woman by the name of Mary that lives with Alzheimer's and I have penned this rather quickly and disjointedly-dlj

Mary’s Eyes
© 2008
Dan Johnson

I do not see her as often as I use to,
Mary broke a leg, required therapy,
Mary has Alzheimer’s, does not remember
Breaking her leg,
Time of day,
Weather is sunny or gray,
Me.

I am not offended that Mary does not remember me,
She has good reason, just the other day,
She asked her daughter, Cheryl, “Where are we going?”
Cheryl replied with a little giggle under her breathe …
“To the brink, Mother, to the brink!”
However, what she really said was:
“To the bathroom mother, to the bathroom!”

I saw Mary about a month ago at a function,
Walked up to her,
Took her hand,
Said “Hi Mary”
She looked frightened,
Mary looked beyond my eyes,
I could not tell for sure, how far she could see,
Or, on the other hand, what she saw.
Mary turned her head to Cheryl and said,
“Who is this strange person?”
I was not offended.
I have often, been referred to, by even my dearest of friends as ‘very strange.’
“Dan, Mother, its Dan! Don’t you remember, we see him all the time at Riley’s”
Mary had a slight glimmer in her eyes and asked Cheryl,
“What is Riley’s?”
As if on cue, Cheryl and I smiled, rolled our eyes, we understood.
 


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 Reviews of "Mary"
Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on December 12, 2008
This is one of your best, Dan, and I know why that is; you writee from your heart about one you care for deeply. I know too, that this careless reaper takes away those with brilliant minds and hearts filled with love; it took my father... back when it didn't have a name... unless some thoughtless one muttered, "He lost his mindm" or worse Thank yu for giving us Mary. - Bill


Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on December 11, 2008
Ah, Dan, your idea of "disjointedly" is better than my structured best! Our hearts have to go out to all the Marys, and we wonder what she may be thinking or feeling when the known becomes unknown and frightening.

Ted

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on December 10, 2008
Dan - Excellent, compassionate, and perceptive poem. One of my favorites. I know the sad mystery of:

She looked frightened,
Mary looked beyond my eyes,
I could not tell for sure, how far she could see,
Or, on the other hand, what she saw.

- David

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on December 9, 2008
Sad indeed.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 9, 2008
So very sad. But at least she has a caring daughter, and a most understanding friend.

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
a sad piece Dan
My mother was there , shes gone
Now my is there and getting worst
Your write is an outstanding informative piece

Peace be with you
William

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
sometimes it seems the true victums of this disease are the ones who can still remember...the family, friends, caregivers...suffering seems to fall on those shoulders

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
My heart goes out to you because I know what this debilitating desease can do to the person and to the families....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
the sadness of Alzheimer's cloaks its victims in fear, doubt and steals the life from them -- peace to you -- JMW

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
Dan, I hope we never get it. I'd hate to forget my friends. Great write.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
The worst mind thief there is! I've taken care of a few Alzheimer's patients, could not do it now. So very sad,you have depicted it as it is with them, disjointed. Very well done ,Dan!

Eileen

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
This gave me a lump in my throat; my aunt succumbed to this awful disease. Great writing once again!

George

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
You know this would touch me as I lost my mother to this thief of mind and eventually body. I smile as I read because Mary has friends who understand and a daughter who loves her.. and that Alzheimers cannot take away..)

Smiles and hugs,
SPP

Reviewed on December 8, 2008
Dan,

Perhaps this makes people understand that horrible disease. This is very well written, and I had tears in my eyes. My mother had Alzheimers'. Logically, you understand what they say, but when she asks who you are...well, you know.

Mary (coincidence)

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on December 8, 2008
A very dear friend of more than fifty years got Alzheimers and did not recognize me or her own children and grandchildren. She was scared and asking all the time where she was, searching for safe corners where curl like a freezing and wet little sparrow. God took pity of her and saw that it was her time to go to a better place.

Georg


Reviewed on December 8, 2008
Disjointed, but captures the sadness of Alzheimer's - well done, Dan.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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