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Old Man in Blue
by D L Johnson → (All Poetry by D L Johnson)
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While waiting for the bus to arrive, an old man approached the bus stop and we had a short, but friendly conversation. He then disaappeared as quickly into the blue.

Old Man in Blue
© 2009
Dan Johnson

Three blocks west of the bust stop
Smoke filled the air,
Puffy clouds, were promptly dispatched,
As smoke meandered with little care
While
Three blocks east, back at the bus stop,
He slowly came my way.
Shuffle, shuffle, left foot limp, slight misstep,
But he continued, carrying two bags filled with groceries, the kind of bags
That cost $1.99 at Safeway, but only cost .25 cents to man-u-fac-ture
Somebody made a large profit on that one.
Old man wore blue jeans that looked like they
Were fresh from the Laundromat, even ironed,
Look at the crease. His white shirt, unbuttoned at
The top button, but clean as clean could be,
On his head a dark blue cap, the kind of cap you would wear out at sea,
Then he asked questions to me.
What smells so good?
I pointed to the BBQ Pit down the street
And he asked with the look of a lost pup looking for sympathy,
Hey lad, don’t feel sorry, don’t be subject to sadness, what I
Really want to know, is, do you have a cigarette or two, for me? I said no,
Shuffle, shuffle, left foot limp, off went the old man into the blue haze.

 

 


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 Reviews of "Old Man in Blue"
Reviewed by kg cummings
Reviewed on January 29, 2010
this piece has a feel of "city" to me. good work when one can feel another's experience. Smiles, Kathy

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 31, 2009
You have recalled, recreated and shared the encounter very effectively through your verses, Dan. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.
Reviewed on September 5, 2009
Could have been an angel my friend........They surround us and give us reasons to be some times......often a muse for beautiful art like this piece.......You flow words of grace, raw reality, and pointed truth Dan.......I admire your craft greatly....and cherish your brotherhood......

Peace,
Bill :-)

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on July 5, 2009
I've worked a lot in deep downtown LA. Great capture of that real world. Patrick

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on July 5, 2009
A moment in time, a passing scene....funny how some things and some people stick in your mind. You made this memorable by your sharp observation of details and the impression this old gent made on you. You made me want to follow him down the street to learn more about him.
Connie

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on July 5, 2009
I am a believer in the thought that everyone who enters our world does so for a reason and though I may not ever truly know it somewhere along the way that presence will make itself known. I hope that made sense..) Loved your poem TD...
hugs to you, SPP

Reviewed by George Thompson
Reviewed on July 5, 2009
Very well written. I like your viewpoints and presentation. Keep writing.

George

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 4, 2009
life, everyday life is filled with kind people, people in need, people with vices large and small -- we get only brief glimpses of what and whom our emotions believe them to be -- the mystery of their truth is always illusive, always disappearing "into a haze of blue" -- a great read D L and intuitive observations -- I like this poem a great deal -- there is an earthy touch of reality that rings so true -- a quality that always attracts me in poetry -- "down to earth and from the heart", as Cash wrote -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 4, 2009
A vivid scene that comes to life! There
seem to be so many like him today, Dan!
Well written poem...

Happy 4th!

ET


Reviewed on July 4, 2009
Vividly imaged, you bring the scene to life - well done, Dan!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.


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