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Fear
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Fear
© 2010
Dan Johnson

Our local writing group was challenged by my co-leader to write something within four minutes on the word “Fear.” It is sometimes surprising what one can come up with under a little pressure.

 

Foul smells fill the air

E xploding bombs fall with little care.

A ngry words spit violent thoughts of despair.

R esulting in calamities, totally unfair.

 


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 Reviews of "Fear"
Reviewed by Sheri Uy
Reviewed on January 28, 2010
Hi Dan, in such a short time, you've written a beautiful acrostic with real depth and meaning. Enjoyed.

Blessings to you,
Sheri

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on January 27, 2010
an excellent posting Dan
with a short the time limit
peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on January 24, 2010
That is a pretty clear description of fear, well-done.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on January 23, 2010
Hey this is like the original four minute mile! I see no pressure here, just fine results. And yes an unrealistic can sometimes produce pleasant suprises. Patrick

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 23, 2010
Succinct; this is a powerful acrostic, Dan. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on January 22, 2010
its a powerful 4 letter word, you've penned it well

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on January 22, 2010
And it all spells out F E A R , thank you for sharing Dan.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on January 21, 2010

Bravo!! This fearful in itself - capturing the state of thhe world. Good goin' = Bill

Reviewed by kg cummings
Reviewed on January 21, 2010
impressive acrostic, Dan. You worked well under pressure! Kathy

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on January 21, 2010
Perceptive. Anger is a mask for fear. Hit the nail on the head, Dan. Kudos...Lin

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on January 21, 2010
So in touch with our world of FEAR, Dan...this is a good estimate and time well spent.

Love,
Sage


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