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Three One-Line Haiku
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I realized an error in the earlier posting which caused me to pull it and replaced it with the current offering. I enjoy the challenge of writing One-Line Haiku in attempting to tell a story in few words.dlj
Three one line haiku Dan Johnson © August, 2011 ~~~~ Fingers dance on piano keys the way rain kisses rose petals ~~~~ Few words spoken we find heaven in the lost language of love ~~~~ Water ripples lily pad floats tom toad smiling gently ‘croaks’

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Reviews of "Three One-Line Haiku"

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 19, 2012

Different. I've never experienced haiku written this way. Nicely done, Dan. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on August 31, 2011

Hiaku takes great skill. One I've never mastered but you most definitely have Dan. I like the one-line format. Each one is a gem.

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on August 29, 2011

Dan, these are rewarding reads my dear friend. You have served up a moment of reading pleasure for me. Haiku and I have not found common grounds that permit me to effect the writing of any worthy of sharing. I am persistent though. So perhaps some day. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila

Reviewed on August 29, 2011

Beautifully done!

Anna

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow

Reviewed on August 29, 2011

I too like the first one best.. they're all good but that first one .. the image is stunning! Well done, TD!! Moi, SPP

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 29, 2011

All quite captivating, my friend.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 28, 2011

Fingers, piano keys & rose petals, thats the best of the bunch for me...e

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on August 28, 2011

i like these, Dan,
i like them very much.

John

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 28, 2011

Liked the first one the best, buddy . . .

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