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Inexplicable
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For the last week or so I have had this word floating around in my head...it's a mystery to me-dlj

 Inexplicable
Dan Johnson
© September, 2011

 

Inexplicable
The mystery of our love
Unexplainable

I believe some things in life are meant to exist without explanation; they just sort of happen, like the day you came into my life, we could not have been more opposite, you were the peaches, I was the out of date cream. You saw through all my flaws and became the smoothness to my sandpaper finish. For reasons far beyond my understanding, I am happy that our love is inexplicable.


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Reviewed on September 30, 2011
let what simply "is" just be. No explanations needed. Well penned Dan.

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on September 12, 2011
Divine poetry. True love is ineffable!

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on September 11, 2011
Dan, emotions are definitely psycho-sensual events -- so accompanying verbiage does not always exist to explain their broad spectrum -- you said that beautifully in a few perfectly chosen words -- I bid you love and peace my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on September 11, 2011
Dan, you pack a lot of life into these few words.
Inexplicable? Raw talent. -gene.

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on September 10, 2011
Yes, those are the loves that are the truest and deepest. Lovely.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on September 10, 2011
Some things require no explanation and just are. Such rarity adds to the beauty. Patrick

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 9, 2011
Nicely done, Dan. I agree that some things just need to be accepted; an explanation just might ruin things. Nice metaphors too. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 8, 2011
Love is indeed perhaps the greatest mystery of all, Dan, and I'm glad that it has revealed its secrets to you whilst retaining, but of course, its fundamental unexplained je ne sais quoi. May that magic last forever! :)) xx

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on September 8, 2011
And that kind of love usually is.. inexplicable! Great piece here...
Moi, SPP

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on September 7, 2011
This is truly awesome!!!

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on September 6, 2011
This is so beautiful, Dan....such depth to so few words! Well done!

Anna

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 5, 2011
"...they just sort of happen..."
absolutely, Dan!
and the wise, and you are a wise man,
don't have to analyse and evaluate
every twist and turn and in doing so
kill the joy.
And that final line is perfect.

John

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on September 5, 2011
Perfect just perfect.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2011
Great word, D L, and every time I see it I think of Sylvester the Cat trying to say it.

This was a sweet piece of writing.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 5, 2011
Dan, this is perfect!

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on September 5, 2011
Dan, I think this defines a lot of relationships that I've seen over the years..... Short & Sweet. Like it lots.....

oh, by the way, I'm "....out of date cream..." too. Thanks Dick

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 5, 2011
Love the strength of it and also - one of its synonyms - incomprehensible holds intrigue for me too. It's a fine word, Dan, to describe the mysteries of love. Enjoyed ... richard


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