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When
by Elizabeth Galvez → (All Poetry by Elizabeth Galvez)
  
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When will we learn
That a kiss is just a kiss
When spoken in whispers
Inside tiny rooms

When will we find
That "I love you's" are words
That fly through the air
Like distracted bees

When will we know
That commitments can be made
Without intent or thought
Of ever being kept

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Elizabeth Galvez
©2002 Elizabeth Galvez
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 Reviews of "When"
Reviewed by Roger Wingrove (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2002
Great timing in between the words!

Reviewed by Lee Garrett
Reviewed on June 21, 2002
Excellent poem. I especially liked the llustration.

Reviewed on June 10, 2002
Your words are like wonders but is so true. Love is like the flower of spring, it always needs nourishing and grow. It cannot be forced or hastened into maturity.

Insisting on commitment before it's ripened, obligating another to love while one is still married is a sin.

I resent that.

May Lu $*_*$ / Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on June 9, 2002
Beautiful write...and Dreamweaver said it best...love is pain and love is ecstasy

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2002
True.. but oh what a fine line it is.. For not always are the words empty, not always are the commitments unkept. And to be wary is important, but to know when to open up and trust is also just as important. For to not give love a chance would be the saddest thing of all.
Love and Light
dreamweaver

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on June 9, 2002
I like these words...


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