Do we ever really look around us, cause
love might be standing right in front of us.
He speaks and my heart flutters like a caged bird,
My ears always strain to catch his every word.
No, he's not talking to me, but a male companion at his side,
I want to kiss his sweet lips, but my feelings I must hide.
Each day I serve him coffee, always making sure our hands touch,
I know that it doesn't phase him, but to me it means so much!
I dream that any day now, he will look over his coffee cup and notice me,
He'll see not a waitress, but his soulmate, his fantasy.
I collect his discarded cup and place my lips where his had been,
My behavior shocks my co-workers, but I have committed no sin.
They tell me to grow-up, being with him is not my destiny,
Tomorrow, I will prove them wrong and ask him," Coffee or Me?"
I love the way this story is going you never cease to amaze me my friend.love ya Blue angel
Reviewed by Michael LaSalle (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2007
lol.. pa, wow, pure, utter desire, you are just Amazing when it comes to the poetic art! expressing vision that simply sweeps me away! intense yearning! expressing an almost puppy love, Love it! mike
I love the way this story is going. I have no idea who old or how young you are, but I will say this much, age doesn't mean a thing when it comes to love. From teenagers to middle-aged women...when you find that special someone, there is no sense of maturity for your actions. Please let us know how this romance unfolds.
Welcome to Authors Den. Here you will come to peace with yourself.
Tell us HOW this one turns UP! SC
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Love this!
YOu're a Sweetheart!
Warmly, WArrior Spirit Lady Sheeeoox
BE SAFE~!
Stay POsitive~!
P.s. YOur imagery astounds me and my heart feels your passions!
I enjoyed this poem. Perhaps your customer is working up the courage to say I'd like my coffee with a sprinkle of your love!? Thanks for sharing this gem of a piece & goodluck.
Welcome to Authors Den. Here you will come to peace with yourself.
~hugs~
Karen
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Love this!
YOu're a Sweetheart!
Warmly, WArrior Spirit Lady Sheeeoox
BE SAFE~!
Stay POsitive~!
P.s. YOur imagery astounds me and my heart feels your passions!
I like my waitress with sugar...I have the cream.
Miss...can we forgot the coffee and...?
Georg
You never dissapoint my dear sugar plum..
Lurve to be lurved...
With lurve,
Ron
like water cascading down a waterfall lol
I mean it. Enjoyed this I did!
Hugs
Dale